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10 lines.
due:48 hrs after check

lol maybe cuz your so good everyones scurred of you

ill battle you .. it wont be a battle sitting i can promise that =)


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ill be back in less than 48 hours from now

-- 16 Dec 2009 06:01 --

when are you gonna post? Ill drop at the same time

-- 16 Dec 2009 06:08 --

this battles only gonna be sitting if u dont drop in time, ill give it another day tho if u want.

-- 16 Dec 2009 21:23 --


Aight

Listen, Imma make this quick, though Haze must be thinkin he doin well..
But he aint SHIT!! just a 'lighter shade of brown' when I give um an 'L' !! (HazeL)
Arv givin him hell n u dont need the alphabet ta "C" me beast this actress,
U always get "slept on" lets change that name to "temperpedic mattress" !!
See mah jabs is sicker, it'll leave ya nasty mixtures of scabs n blisters
mah raps deliver n make ur "Last Days" realer than ur wackest scripture !!
Ill leave this coward smitten, devour his writtens with speed, power n rhythm
u a flower thats hidden cuz only time u "droppin bars" is during a shower in prison !!
this guy is harmless with lines of garbage, no doubt he'll prolly die retarded
fuck with me Ill key another marvelous win..and laugh while u try ur hardest !!


GL

you? barely past the status quo, the wackest of faggits you lack a savage flow
this actors like vaughn in dodgeball, VINCe'll get remembered as an average joe
you could only win by dickrydin votes but im sure these faggits'll plot
yea alphabetically you aheada me but thats the only category you got
he says he got a strap and this dummie claims to blast it
this AR is a fake like his gun thats made of plastic
im just flowin so cold scoldin this vet hes fucked frozen to death
nobody learned yet, you hit haze and end up the one stuck holdin ya chest
dont worry ill take it easy but make sure this quick slap is ya last mishap
so after i "punch A out" i put in his two weeks notice so he can quit rap

Yeah gl son

Vote up

Mulits - Arv
Punches - J
Flow - tie
consistency - Tie
Most Enjoyable/memorable - J

Arv, the "drop the bar in prison" line is a little played.. I've seen it at least twice on this site alone. But you had some nice multis in there. And I don't really like lines you have to explain (ie Haze/Hazel).

J's verse had my lmfao.. "this actors like vaughn in dodgeball, VINCe'll get remembered as an average joe", "yea alphabetically you aheada me but thats the only category you got" - His set up a knock'em down punches won this IMO. (last line was corny tho J)

Vote = J

Listen, Imma make this quick, though Haze must be thinkin he doin well..
But he aint SHIT!! just a 'lighter shade of brown' when I give um an 'L' !! (HazeL)

Nice 8/10

Arv givin him hell n u dont need the alphabet ta "C" me beast this actress,
U always get "slept on" lets change that name to "temperpedic mattress" !!

Shit is Made Played, 5/10 flowed and worded nice tho

See mah jabs is sicker, it'll leave ya nasty mixtures of scabs n blisters
mah raps deliver n make ur "Last Days" realer than ur wackest scripture !!

Ill Flow, Light punch!! 7/10

Ill leave this coward smitten, devour his writtens with speed, power n rhythm
u a flower thats hidden cuz only time u "droppin bars" is during a shower in prison !!

Again, PLAYYED! 5/10

this guy is harmless with lines of garbage, no doubt he'll prolly die retarded
fuck with me Ill key another marvelous win..and laugh while u try ur hardest !!

LMFAO!! 8/10

33/50


you? barely past the status quo, the wackest of faggits you lack a savage flow
this actors like vaughn in dodgeball, VINCe'll get remembered as an average joe

lmfao ^^ 8/10, Solid

you could only win by dickrydin votes but im sure these faggits'll plot
yea alphabetically you aheada me but thats the only category you got

agian, made me laugh, solid personal 8/10

he says he got a strap and this dummie claims to blast it
this AR is a fake like his gun thats made of plastic

naw, 5/10

im just flowin so cold scoldin this vet hes fucked frozen to death
nobody learned yet, you hit haze and end up the one stuck holdin ya chest

Creative punch, 8/10 HArd hitting

dont worry ill take it easy but make sure this quick slap is ya last mishap
so after i "punch A out" i put in his two weeks notice so he can quit rap

weak closer 5/10

34/50



vote haze, by a noe hair!!

uppin

Mulits - Arv
Punches - Arv
Flow - J
Wordplay-Arv
NamePlay-J

This was so close, I had to read it twice. In the end, I'll have to give Arv this one by half a hair. Arv's "droppin bars" didn't make sense but won that cat, but Arv had the upper hand with his decent nameplay. Haze's one was alright, but his others weren't. So by my standard cats, Arv takes it.

Vote-Arvincible

no voting criteria so i`ll score the bars.

Listen, Imma make this quick, though Haze must be thinkin he doin well..
But he aint SHIT!! just a 'lighter shade of brown' when I give um an 'L' !! (HazeL)
^^^^
almost brilliant. you should have found a way to incorporate the wordplay without the need for explanitions but still dope...8/10

Arv givin him hell n u dont need the alphabet ta "C" me beast this actress,
U always get "slept on" lets change that name to "temperpedic mattress" !!
^^^^
slept on like a mattress? come on Arv your better than that. played to fuck..4/10

See mah jabs is sicker, it'll leave ya nasty mixtures of scabs n blisters
mah raps deliver n make ur "Last Days" realer than ur wackest scripture !!
^^^^
a personal but dosent sting much...7/10

Ill leave this coward smitten, devour his writtens with speed, power n rhythm
u a flower thats hidden cuz only time u "droppin bars" is during a shower in prison !!
^^^^
a horrible bar by your standards. first off it played out. second it dosent even make sense coz he does drop bars..hes batling you...4/10

this guy is harmless with lines of garbage, no doubt he'll prolly die retarded
fuck with me Ill key another marvelous win..and laugh while u try ur hardest !!
^^^^
again weak and a waste of a bar. wheres the punchline? it kinda sums up your verse really. its either rushed or your over confidnet and underestimated your opponent in my opinion.. gotta give it a 4/10

Arvincible...27/50


you? barely past the status quo, the wackest of faggits you lack a savage flow
this actors like vaughn in dodgeball, VINCe'll get remembered as an average joe
^^^^
dope punchline. your best of the verse..8/10

you could only win by dickrydin votes but im sure these faggits'll plot
yea alphabetically you aheada me but thats the only category you got
^^^^
simple but an effective personal...7/10


he says he got a strap and this dummie claims to blast it
this AR is a fake like his gun thats made of plastic
^^^^
nice attempt but Arv dosent claim to be shooting people as far as im aware...so 5/10

im just flowin so cold scoldin this vet hes fucked frozen to death
nobody learned yet, you hit haze and end up the one stuck holdin ya chest
^^^^
if Arv had tried a smoke haze punch i would have said it was played so the same applys to you...4/10

dont worry ill take it easy but make sure this quick slap is ya last mishap
so after i "punch A out" i put in his two weeks notice so he can quit rap
^^^^
its alright nothing special 5/10


overall
Arvincible 27/50
J Haze 29/50

VOTE J HAZE

ive seen better from both of you especially Arv

uppin?

uppin votes

GOOD LINES FROM ARV...
Listen, Imma make this quick, though Haze must be thinkin he doin well..
But he aint SHIT!! just a 'lighter shade of brown' when I give um an 'L' !! (HazeL)

HAHA NICE LINE!!

Arv givin him hell n u dont need the alphabet ta "C" me beast this actress,
U always get "slept on" lets change that name to "temperpedic mattress" !!

PLAYED...BUT STILL HIT GOOD

Ill leave this coward smitten, devour his writtens with speed, power n rhythm
u a flower thats hidden cuz only time u "droppin bars" is during a shower in prison !!

LMAO HAD ME LAUGH OUT LOUD!^^



GOOD LINES FROM HAZE...
you? barely past the status quo, the wackest of faggits you lack a savage flow
this actors like vaughn in dodgeball, VINCe'll get remembered as an average joe

HAHAHA VERY NIICE NAME PLAY!^^

he says he got a strap and this dummie claims to blast it
this AR is a fake like his gun thats made of plastic

HAHAHAHA^^^


OVERALL I THINK ARV TOOK THIS HAD MORE QUOTABLES IN THIS AND WAS MORE CONSISTANT. GOOD BATTLE THO NICE LINES AND CREATIVITY.


VOTE-arv

MY BAD FOR MESSIN UP 1ST TIME LOL

^^^ wait..what?