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[CHORUS]
This is our city, who the victims now, (we run this)/
and cant no government system hold us down/
were you from, (Chicago), were you from, (Chicago)/
were you from, (Chicago), were you from, (Chicago)/
this is our city, bang our test and youll die/
cause it aint worth reppin if it aint reppin the Chi/
so Eastside (rep), Westside (rep)/
Northside (rep), Southside (rep)

[VERSE]
You know it is/
(here it comes), like flames back in the Chicago fire/
(we begun), came on attack brang memories through the cypher/
(already won), slained on the track killed through the wire/
reigned from the bottom so I can only build higher/
(live) from the city that brought the game to its best/
Chicago the home of TONGUE TWIST and KANYE WEST/
what did you expect, this is Americas murder capitol/
Americas lyrical threat, destroyin Americas capital/
its factual, peep the individual hooks I blast daily/
what we doin about these criminals and crooks ask DALEY/
maybe, people will now actually listen ta whats written/
rap ta whats spittin and diss this wack system of capitalism/
see they tryin ta say we pollute wit rhymes spit in the booth/
man this is real Hip-Hop we speak ta the mind of the youth/
now, (rep Chicago), the city of sports fanatics, whores and addicts/
of course its tragic, when I bring the torch and attack it/
come on talk ta me, your flows off ta me/
if you aint about that bullshit then WALK WIT ME/
I don't wanna hear about ya area, ya troops, and crime scenes/
I wanna hear MASS HYSTERIA, JUICE, PRIME, and RHYME SCHEME/
its my dream, ta resurrect the game wit biblical raps/
and disinfect the shame from these typical cats/
so for emcees, tryin ta put an end to our power/
please, Bin Laden wouldn't even attempt ta crash through our towers

[CHORUS]
This is our city, who the victims now, (we run this)/
and cant no government system hold us down/
were you from, (Chicago), were you from, (Chicago)/
were you from, (Chicago), were you from, (Chicago)/
this is our city, bang our test and youll die/
cause it aint worth reppin if it aint reppin the Chi/
so Eastside (rep), Westside (rep)/
Northside (rep), Southside (rep)

chi-town eh?...same here...where at?...if u do audio we can hook up n shit....

Eh dude. This was pretty sick and this line was ill.

maybe, people will now actually listen ta whats written/
rap ta whats spittin and diss this wack system of capitalism/

8.9/10

complexity wrote:Eh dude. This was pretty sick and this line was ill.

maybe, people will now actually listen ta whats written/
rap ta whats spittin and diss this wack system of capitalism/

8.9/10

wat u gettin at bitch...lol

how about you try giving him feedback on this piece viral. lol

Yeah man that was good I actually enjoyed it, I did feel one or two forced rhymes but no big deal. Make sure to post its audio when it's done I want to hear it.

yea how bout it fuck face?...lol

i was gettin dere...


i thought dis piece was dope, especially being from the chi myself...ima give it a 8.9/10..keep it up man...dere were some parts dat were a lil iffy..where da flow kinda skipped...but its all good as long as u can present it good

decent piece.. im sure it sounds better on audio.. 7/10

good shit man 8.5/10

That was some ill shit homez...keep that shit comin!!

8.7

rep that ill side man!!! we neighbors i'm from Missouri. good shit tho WE RUN THIS!

8.7/10

l8ter

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Lawgix wrote:rep that ill side man!!! we neighbors i'm from Missouri. good shit tho WE RUN THIS!21

I thought Texas runned the show like a Rodeo............

Decent,
would be a nice track with the right beat.


Keep it up.

invincible-lyricist wrote:

Lawgix wrote:rep that ill side man!!! we neighbors i'm from Missouri. good shit tho WE RUN THIS!21

I thought Texas runned the show like a Rodeo............

runned? i don't think thats a word

ran the show smartass