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Quix:
Its known all over this site....
i'm one of dah Illest Yoh! you kids can't help but tah Feel dah Flow
Cuz i 'Ain't robbing Blockbuster' when i Steal the Show
get your Meals tah go, cuz we Run this like Alicia keys and Jigga!
but you can't get your heads around that, Just Believe it Nigguh!
we Recive the figures taht you admire and Dream about!
28 n 12 n rising; no need tah Preech yah'll Seen Ma Clout!
I took mah Regualr vocab and Excalated; witnessed Devastation
suffering from Deprevation, you can blame it on the alcohal or just our Legislation
check mah Presintations; i've absolutley Murked catz and retired some
they returned to re-read the battle, n gave me props cuz i inspired-em!
now the Desires done; you feeble heathens are lost like Indirect, Pathways
while we the illest on Illest wid more connections than internet cafes
now you know i sdo ma best tah lead and intelectually have no Admiration for Fake-Kids!
Regretfully people can't see, Quix a BEAST wid Assperations for greatness
you catz have witnessed; Crack form Quix when mah Factz are Written!
plus i got nigguhs all over the site ducking and dodging me Just ask Ambition


Junior:
I'm teaching a lesson on beats and I'm stressin
creativity instead of cliched expressions
since my blessed conception, i've bested contestants
so expect nothing less than my best when I'm tested
Like preachers and reverends, I give lectures with scripts
I'm clever and slick without 'forcing' rhymes, I'm no Sith
I'm not pleading the fifth, I'll admit this kid's sick
I write flicks with mouse clicks, sound clips and Crowned wit
the self-proclaimed Prince, future, past and present tense
So I've presented these sentences to you as evidence
Exhibit A: More similes than the Sahara's got sand
Prepared to expand so take good care of my land
Voltaire on the stand with enlightening lyrics
like Lightning you hear it, when i write from my spirit
My Mind's engineered to produce heat like skillets
My skill set's revealed that You've now met the illest


Insoluble:
Fuck that I'M the dopest. Put that in your pipe and smoke it.
Light it,stoke it. Smug cats take what i write and quote it.
I aint takin no crap like "yo dude here's your stool back"
The rulers back,comitting the cruellest raps to foolscap.
I muscle kids off the track like im DUI in a go-kart
so below par rap stars' faux par's get cracked with the crow bar.
leaving lyrical smears.dear, no verbal logs are dislodged here.
im all flow and no stodge cloggin bogs with my logorrhoea.
off my noggin on grog n beers when im near the fog appears
a pure and ruthless rap machine conceived from cogs n gears.
bloggin for peers. Schoolin wack kids like Wackford Squeers
Attack my fears head on by backslapping these backward queers.
extracting claps n cheers,no jeers, just "Heck Yeah!"s
I Decks squares like a bunch of collapsing checked deckchairs
bring wreck with the secateurs and get more mic checks per hec-tare
insoluble the name.he's ruff like shakespeare's flaired neckwear.

1/4Zone:
I ain't into braggin', honkin' horns, or gettin' hard
but you could smell the shit I'm on when it's givin' off
written's raw, cookin' up the album while I body spitters
throwdown like Bobby Flay, on your chess like Bobby Fisher
checkmate! call me winner, I suffer from arrogance
shit out confidence, then I stand up n I piss excellance
I commit to truth on this rap, hate causin' bubonic plagues
so when I spew on the tracks, that pussy get yeast infected
a beast perfected, let loose on the cats weak protection
I am small pox, swine flu, anthrax mixed with syphillis
the ether, the elixer, Eve's fruit, Adam's apple, the illest
Bush's heart, the sickest, the liquid, Han Solo encrypted
I am the passion, the hate, the envy and the victims
The vision Nastradamus had, and Da Vinci's Division (God)....

Arv:
im the best at what i do, i stay reignin, im atop the roof
no homo im on top of u, so heres another drop of proof,
For every drop i drop im droppin dudes cuz i deposit truth
Ill stop ur spoofs, shatter the frames of minds with chains of rhymes
multiple interconnected words that leave the witness insane n blind
i aim with lines that stay relevant as to whatever i say's intelligent
The lyrics will murder u on its own and even sweep away evidence
for the paid benefits, of destroying what you may represent
watch the flow, I got original game but still im past the Genesis.. the MVP
yet I contribute more than Nash's ten-assists expressin rash emphasis
I trash menaces cuz i myself is the nemesis of fake bullshit bastards
a full clip blasted leave all the foolish plastered...in a race to see who
can pull ish faster, cuz nobody can lyrically control words that way arv is
the verbs and the nouns so superb and profound and perfectly harnessed
hardness.. I'm ill, sick, beast, solid; whatever u wanna call it
not the type to brawl with..15 got lucky while 52 have fallen...
Im an epiphany, the epitome of greatness, yes the flame i own it
Bitch u look up to me but hate me at the exact same moment

the self-proclaimed Prince, future, past and present tense
So I've presented these sentences to you as evidence

HOOOT ^




written's raw, cookin' up the album while I body spitters
throwdown like Bobby Flay, on your chess like Bobby Fisher
checkmate! call me winner, I suffer from arrogance
shit out confidence, then I stand up n I piss excellance


Liked that a lot ^^



For every drop i drop im droppin dudes cuz i deposit truth
Ill stop ur spoofs, shatter the frames of minds with chains of rhymes
multiple interconnected words that leave the witness insane n blind
i aim with lines that stay relevant as to whatever i say's intelligent
The lyrics will murder u on its own and even sweep away evidence
for the paid benefits, of destroying what you may represent
watch the flow, I got original game but still im past the Genesis..

Arv you cam Correct Kid!! nice lil Verse!! ^ liekd that the best!!

lets go haha

check mah Presintations; i've absolutley Murked catz and retired some
they returned to re-read the battle, n gave me props cuz i inspired-em!

^^ dope quix

the self-proclaimed Prince, future, past and present tense
So I've presented these sentences to you as evidence

^^ best part from ur piece junior

im all flow and no stodge cloggin bogs with my logorrhoea.
off my noggin on grog n beers when im near the fog appears

^^ best imo in insoluble's part

the self-proclaimed Prince, future, past and present tense
So I've presented these sentences to you as evidence

^^ 1/4 zone good shit here


good shit guys pretty enjoyable piece

uppin

I'm teaching a lesson on beats and I'm stressin
creativity instead of cliched expressions


Like The Meaning Already ..

since my blessed conception, i've bested contestants
so expect nothing less than my best when I'm tested

Alright .. i See The Scheme Being Toyed With

Like preachers and reverends, I give lectures with scripts
I'm clever and slick without 'forcing' rhymes, I'm no Sith

Lectures with Scripts was Decent


Your Verse Kept steady , just Seems a Bit on The Mild Side. Liked the Multis Playing Of Rhyme Scheme. Good Verse

nsoluble:
Fuck that I'M the dopest. Put that in your pipe and smoke it.
Light it,stoke it. Smug cats take what i write and quote it.
I aint takin no crap like "yo dude here's your stool back"
The rulers back,comitting the cruellest raps to foolscap.
I muscle kids off the track like im DUI in a go-kart
so below par rap stars' faux par's get cracked with the crow bar.
leaving lyrical smears.dear, no verbal logs are dislodged here.
im all flow and no stodge cloggin bogs with my logorrhoea.
off my noggin on grog n beers when im near the fog appears
a pure and ruthless rap machine conceived from cogs n gears.
bloggin for peers. Schoolin wack kids like Wackford Squeers
Attack my fears head on by backslapping these backward queers.
extracting claps n cheers,no jeers, just "Heck Yeah!"s
I Decks squares like a bunch of collapsing checked deckchairs
bring wreck with the secateurs and get more mic checks per hec-tare
insoluble the name.he's ruff like shakespeare's flaired neckwear.


Overall Pretty Plain in my eyes. you Had multis & Attempted Alot Of Punches but in My Eyes None of Them were Connecters, you Did Keep a Ransom Feel To it, just Didnt Bring Hitchcock Punchlines.

Anyways Decent Verse.


written's raw, cookin' up the album while I body spitters
throwdown like Bobby Flay, on your chess like Bobby Fisher
checkmate! call me winner, I suffer from arrogance
shit out confidence, then I stand up n I piss excellance

Liking The Style of This lol funny shit


I commit to truth on this rap, hate causin' bubonic plagues
so when I spew on the tracks, that pussy get yeast infected
a beast perfected, let loose on the cats weak protection
I am small pox, swine flu, anthrax mixed with syphillis
the ether, the elixer, Eve's fruit, Adam's apple, the illest

This was Cool Up To The "illest" Part it doesn't Pair up With Syphilis like that lol

I am the passion, the hate, the envy and the victims
The vision Nastradamus had, and Da Vinci's Division

Fire .. Good Closer




im the best at what i do, i stay reignin, im atop the roof
no homo im on top of u, so heres another drop of proof,


Aiiiight..


For every drop i drop im droppin dudes cuz i deposit truth
Ill stop ur spoofs, shatter the frames of minds with chains of rhymes

Uh Huh ..


multiple interconnected words that leave the witness insane n blind
i aim with lines that stay relevant as to whatever i say's intelligent

Yerp .. Multis there .. Just Waiting For The Serious Hay's..

The lyrics will murder u on its own and even sweep away evidence
for the paid benefits, of destroying what you may represent

Word ..

watch the flow, I got original game but still im past the Genesis.. the MVP
yet I contribute more than Nash's ten-assists expressin rash emphasis

Hiit.. Word's strung together Well.


I trash menaces cuz i myself is the nemesis of fake bullshit bastards


OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOWWWWWWWWWWWWW....



a full clip blasted leave all the foolish plastered...in a race to see who
can pull ish faster, cuz nobody can lyrically control words that way arv is
the verbs and the nouns so superb and profound and perfectly harnessed


KEeping The Flow Going .. good ish



I'm ill, sick, beast, solid; whatever u wanna call it
not the type to brawl with..15 got lucky while 52 have fallen...

Bring the Ego Out .. Good Nonetheless.

Im an epiphany, the epitome of greatness, yes the flame i own it
Bitch u look up to me but hate me at the exact same moment


Good Closer.
\



Anyways Good Collab yall .. Overall i think Arv Outshined every one on it.


Keepp Dropping

thanks for the feed fellaz!! its much appreciated and will be return by me at least!!

well, those of you who left feed that is!

I'm surprised at the amount of feedback this piece has received. Then again all the scriptures should have more with this many people dropping. We need more of these super-group collabs anyway. They are some of the most entertaining on the site (I've only been on 2, hit me up bastards.)

Quix = Strong verse

Favorite bars

"check mah Presintations; i've absolutley Murked catz and retired some
they returned to re-read the battle, n gave me props cuz i inspired-em!
now the Desires done; you feeble heathens are lost like Indirect, Pathways
while we the illest on Illest wid more connections than internet cafes
now you know i sdo ma best tah lead and intelectually have no Admiration for Fake-Kids!
Regretfully people can't see, Quix a BEAST wid Assperations for greatness"

Weakness

Not much, you could have connected some of the bars better. I also thought that last punchline that I just quoted could have been a lot better of a bar. It wasn't really that lucid either, which isn't good when the drop wasn't too complex.

Junior = Boring

Favorite Bars

"the self-proclaimed Prince, future, past and present tense
So I've presented these sentences to you as evidence"

Weakness

Excite me! You're on a 5 person collaboration, you need to stand out that doesn't necessarily mean have the best verse, but be memorable. Say something completely original. You're a pretty good writer, I know you can do it. In any other situation, I'd say that was a 4 star verse.

Insoluble = ???

Favorite Bars

"Fuck that I'M the dopest. Put that in your pipe and smoke it.
Light it,stoke it. Smug cats take what i write and quote it."

Weakness

I don't know what you were talking about. Some of it kind of sounded cool, a lot of it sounded corny. I don't even know what to make of that verse.

Quarter = Nice verse.

Favorite Bars

"I am small pox, swine flu, anthrax mixed with syphillis
the ether, the elixer, Eve's fruit, Adam's apple, the illest
Bush's heart, the sickest, the liquid, Han Solo encrypted
I am the passion, the hate, the envy and the victims"

Weakness

I didn't like the reference to Bobby Fisher then a bar later you use that piss excellence line. Kind of annoyed me, other then that cool.

Arv = Articulate and consistent

Favorite Bars

watch the flow, I got original game but still im past the Genesis.. the MVP
yet I contribute more than Nash's ten-assists expressin rash emphasis
I trash menaces cuz i myself is the nemesis of fake bullshit bastards
a full clip blasted leave all the foolish plastered...in a race to see who
can pull ish faster, cuz nobody can lyrically control words that way arv is
the verbs and the nouns so superb and profound and perfectly harnessed
hardness.. I'm ill, sick, beast, solid; whatever u wanna call it
not the type to brawl with..15 got lucky while 52 have fallen...

Weakness

The first half compared to the second.

cool collab here.

Quix was a good opening act. he started off strong and finished his verse well. i wasnt feeling the middle of his verse as much as the opening bars and closers.

i'm one of dah Illest Yoh! you kids can't help but tah Feel dah Flow
Cuz i 'Ain't robbing Blockbuster' when i Steal the Show


Junior came dope as fuck. i think this is the first ive heard from him. excellent mulits and flow. this would fit audio pretty well i think. i would of liked to see some more punchlines

I write flicks with mouse clicks, sound clips and Crowned wit
^^^
i liked this line


ive never heard of Insoluble either but he came correct too. had some nice rhyme schemes and punchlines. some of the punches could be improved ie the go kart one

Light it,stoke it. Smug cats take what i write and quote it.
I aint takin no crap like "yo dude here's your stool back
^^^
this line was clever and made me laugh


i thought quarterzone started off a bit slow but the last half of his verse was dope as fuck...possibly the highlight of the whole collab for me.

I commit to truth on this rap, hate causin' bubonic plagues
so when I spew on the tracks, that pussy get yeast infected
a beast perfected, let loose on the cats weak protection
I am small pox, swine flu, anthrax mixed with syphillis
the ether, the elixer, Eve's fruit, Adam's apple, the illest
Bush's heart, the sickest, the liquid, Han Solo encrypted
I am the passion, the hate, the envy and the victims
The vision Nastradamus had, and Da Vinci's Division (God)....
^^^^
excellent


Arvincible verse was good aswell. it kinda kept getting better as it progressed and was a nice closer to the collab.

i aim with lines that stay relevant as to whatever i say's intelligent
The lyrics will murder u on its own and even sweep away evidence
for the paid benefits, of destroying what you may represent
watch the flow, I got original game but still im past the Genesis
^^^^
i enjoyed this section


overall a dope collab. it must my first time reading 3 out of the 5 of you and everyone did well

Whoa...LoL thanx for the love people
I think the collab came out purdy good...
nice!