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Im droppin this plank, you suck, its obvious man
so watch me take "loot" like i was robbin a bank
you come with the sloppiest plans, keep bringin ya wack words
you "C", "B" couldnt bring his "A" game if he was sayin the alphabet backwards
idiot, your a phoney guy, trex, you`l only die next!
after i put the heat to your ass, leavin you pumped up like ronnie colemans biceps
why test? you get fucked so much you got a sore ass
so watch me leave abs tore apart like an intense core class

My bad, my access to the net is limited. I'll drop asap though...

(edited to add verse)


Decent Drop…

But….


I Will bash your skull, and since he got a “Shy“ flow, Ill beat this nigga with my eyes-closed!
I wont lie though, I Doubt your survival! He like The Windy City , n we all know “Shi blows!”

Allow me to remind those….The flow level leave you below-sea, explode-heat, not even Mario be like “Yo-Shi!”/
Call me “Lightning Mc-clean”!! Since this nigga says he “rusty” like Tom Magliozzi!/2

Oppose me? Exchange Audio punches point-blank, then change, all the ‘B---SH--” in his verse and-name and battling this nigga becomes like a “video-game!”*/3 [lol..FPS anyone? ]

Feelin the Payne? Dyslexic Actor how I flip scripts and rip this clit like vaginal pierce-ings/
I Paul Pierce-things, and put Shi “under my wing“, now “Bock” has “Air over (his) G string”/4**


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*Switch around the b and sh in his name it becomes “bioshock” …smh come on people.
**Air on the G string + Sabastian Bach…you look it up. Dont understand dont vote..


Uppin 4 Votes..


-- Sun Dec 20, 2009 12:12 pm --

Uppin, lets get some votes in...

this was an okay battle, i didnt like how alot of the punches seemed forced..heres the basic cats i go by..
the flow was iffy for both ends as well

punches - Absolute
personals - Absolute..better attempts at his name
flow - i liked Absolute's multis and flow more but both need work.
wordplay - Shiobock got his closer and 2nd bar for this
Entertainment - Absolute

I favored his more because of the creativity.. it really beat the "loot" line that shiobock had, but hey uve got a steady structure man, all u need is more creative punches and wordplays and ull kill it.

vote goes to Absolute

1-0

Wordplay/Nameplay-Absolute
Flow-Absolute, SB, you stretched your bars a little too much
Personals-Tie
Entertainment-Tie
Punches-Absolute

Vote-Absolute

Shiobock, that had some great potential in it, both of ya'll need to keep working in fact, alright battle, Absolute had a lot of expected name play, but were clever as far as expected nameplay is concerned. Nothing really jumped out at me, but time and effort will change everything.

I vote for Absolute, but I didn't think his work was far greater than Shiobock's.

Both were decent reads, but I agree with Arvincible when he said both flows could be better.

Punches - Abs
Personals - Abs, Tryed more!
Floww - tie
wordplay - Shi
Entertainment - Abs
vote - Abs

HAd a better all around verse, better flow, punches nameplay normally will get my vote!!


vote - Abs

someone close and update and move this shit out

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