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This ones for my city right here..enjoy it! 2nd verse Was a freestyle just to make that clear.

will be going on my Mixtape "Only the beginning" right before i let out my cd produced by my boy Paktraxx..not only vocals and mastering but all the beats done by paktraxx as well on the new cd.


Fav Line From Song.."So Throw That Old Weed Out, Im Og'd Out, I Was a Little Nigga At The Og's House"

Aight i'm feelin this Beat..on that mellow tip..

that hook is aight

1st Verse..aight flo ..presence is aight.. mixxings pretty good tho..

2nd Verse..Pretty good if it's a one take freestyle..

i like the concept..gotta throw it up for ya city..4 sure..so Props..you a west coast rapper? kinda sound like one..imo..keep doin ya thing..

yeah west coast...santa barbara california..born n raised. but been to the east coast and spit there too

thanks for the feedback though! appreciate it

yo my dude this is pretty sick man... beats dope as hell fam... quality is good too dude... that freestyle was good too man... i liked it fam... give a 8/10... post more on here dude!!!! for real...

Smooth delivery (west coast sound)
Flow chopped in some places but you played it off well (signs of someone whose been doin this for awhile).
Content - stayed on point.
Production is Grade A
Beat is tight as hell.

Peeped some of your other stuff too. Pretty damn good.
Riggz

YungDosia wrote:yeah west coast...santa barbara california..born n raised. but been to the east coast and spit there too

Good deal, I'm visiting Santa Barb this year to hook up wit my homie Silas of Guilty over there at BabyRee. Nice track by the way.

Ha Silas? yeah i know that nigga...trust me drop my name around sb and theyll know who u talking about..and guily dont even drop tracks no more lol they had 1 good song, got blown up cuz they workd with damizza went no where...i called they whole crew out on the spot to battle me, none were done...but holla at me if u got some good shit pimp and we will get down...and i aint hating on those fools, just dont like people in my town who think they done some shit when they only been rappin for like 2 yrs ive been puttin on doin shows out here for the last 8 yrs. but holla if u down here and wanna get some shit really poppin.

and thanks for all the feedback will definately drop more stuff soon for yall.

track is dope man only prob I got wit it is dat u didn't really go hard on it, like if I was reppin' my city I'd go hard didn't see the passion on dis track like I thought I would. If I was u I'd record it and go harder on the hook, besides that everythin is ill beat is sick production is sick 2. Keep droppin' dawg I fucks wit niggaz in Cali 2 like my nigga Kurse does as well; like 2 hear more 4rm u 2 homie.

It's Alright. Didn't Think It Was Impressive, But It Was OK. I Felt The First Verse Dragged A Bit, I Forced My Self To Listen To The Rest And It Picked Up On The Second Verse. Overall I Thought It Was Mediocre.

Thanks for the love...

and petra...u dont force yaself to listen to anythng if u wanted u couldve turned it off but u didnt did u?...

and yeah i feel the criticism but it was meant to be laid back, if u hear the beat u wouldnt wanna flow all loud and hyped would not work....

again thanks 4 the feed

YungDosia wrote:and petra...u dont force yaself to listen to anythng

...Well I Did.

lol...i know u listened to it....and couldnt turn it off..

lmao all good pimp ive heard ya stuff, elevate

YungDosia wrote:lol...i know u listened to it....and couldnt turn it off..

lmao all good pimp ive heard ya stuff, elevate

yea this is finna be bad right here, yo I mean no disrespect regarding ur track but like I said if it was me I'd do it differently u jus got a dif style if peps feel it then they feel it if they don't then they don't. I ain't feeling it at all that's just my opinion other peps might like it tho it is wat it is.

Ite well...u can get that beat as well and rap over it hyped up then show me how it turns out

I'm straight lol don't think it's necessary 4 me 2 murda a beat u did 4 ur city I ain't tryin 2 do dat man think u took wat I told u 2 heart tho no pun intended if it was garbage I'd tell u it's garbage son. Jus think u could've done it differently dats all