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Posted: **Fri Jan 01, 2010 7:40 am**

Nothin too complex, just basically a freestyle I did and decided to write it rather than spit it so i could remeber it..

Drinkin on Heineken/
They like Abs rhyme again/
But one I lose it, there is no findin it/
Absolute on special assignment/
tryin to climb-in/
hip-hops hymen/
And they blockin in the game like lineman/
cuz they just got males like AOL sign-in/
Im vibrant/
While you run on fumes like hybrids/
Usually just cool and quiet/
til i get/
Irate/
Den Im like a den of lions/
Goin for this green like irish/
out to sea like pirates/
or iris/
the Answer like Ivers/
flow make you feel like divers/
when I invent like Mcguyvers/
Your girl goin down like Chrysler/
So fast, you'll shit! ill get you some diapers/
Evict you in battle but ill turn out ya lights first/
DIET MC'S, Y'ALL SPIT OUT A LIGHT VERSE/
Abso pisses excellence...here to quench your thirst../

Thats all I got, and oh yeah..

YOU AINT JOHNY DEPP BITCH!! DONT PIRATE MY SHIT!//

LOL... uppin for feed...

Posted: **Tue Jan 05, 2010 2:52 am**

its cool flow was good very simple nothin complex man i injoyed it tho caught me bobbin ma head while readin tho!

Posted: **Tue Jan 05, 2010 3:01 am**

Good, then I did my job =) sometimes simple is better. I'd rather have mad quotables then a notable flow. Just my style. thanks for the feedback though. uppin for more

Posted: **Tue Jan 05, 2010 3:36 pm**

It was okay.. Like yu said it was simple....

But for real. If yu wanna be remember'd. Get complex, nobody remembers a simple flow. They always remember people who are creative with there rhymes...

Thats what separates real lyricists with everyday heads key'n shit up.

Was decent.
Keep up.

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