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6 Bars.
House Rules.




-No feeding, flipping, biting or recycling.
-First to 5 votes wins, 3-0=K.O. (4-1=T.K.O.)
-Deadline is 48 hours after battle is set up.

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Listen!!



You Might Appear as a Vet but Still someone i Ain't Feelin Is A Threat..
Fuck Ya Punches!! I'll throw an Uppercut N Cover The Ceilin Wit Ya Flesh!!!
Ya Washed Up Now Days Far from ya Prime Fadin Instead Ah Movin..
Your No Teacher threw time He Grow's Weaker in his "Stages Of Evolution"!!..
Have Ya Beef Spiral like a Pin Wheel..Always Lookin for a Win Still..
And The Only time E's on "streak" is Wen Thrown across Ah Wind Shield!!..
Ya Hopeless Nigga!! you all wanna see me Choke This Bitch Huh!?..
Only Time Ev's Almighy is When your Referin to the Motion Picture!!..
Never Hard always Soft as Shit plus there's No Typa Force In Ya Hits..
Ya Rep'll snap when its stretched like a condom comin Off Of Mah Dick!!..
Take Caution Wit This you should Forfeit Or Quit i gotta Flawless Victory..
Step Down!!! I just left you wit ya Head Down like You Warship Misery!!..

i'll try to drop a little later, i wasn't sure when u were gonna drop since there was no due date. nice verse though

-- Thu Jan 07, 2010 6:23 pm --

My verse has been completed now you worthless as a fetus,
He couldn't find himself if he went searchin for his penis,
Now whats the point of yellin man, that purpose is defeated,
I'll put you underground beneath the surface where ya feet is,
These bars are so unearthly you'll be nervous when you read it,
Don't pray to me for mercy cause then church is what you needed,
You couldn't 'stand' a chance, you got no senses of 'podiatry'
This battle's hand to hand, cause these weapon's don't apply to me,
Each rhyme's stiletto knives, it takes a second to divide a key,
These lines i spit it nice,.. I've invented what you try to be,
This guy forgets his 'type', you got no sentence of 'variety',
Now time to "ghett-o' life", I'll bring this Menace II Society,

Nice Verse E...Uppin Votes

When Menace “shows up” you can expect good shit, so let’s see:
You Might Appear as a Vet but Still someone i Ain't Feelin Is A Threat..
Fuck Ya Punches!! I'll throw an Uppercut N Cover The Ceilin Wit Ya Flesh!!!
4/5 – Got damn!
Ya Washed Up Now Days Far from ya Prime Fadin Instead Ah Movin..
Your No Teacher threw time He Grow's Weaker in his "Stages Of Evolution"!!..
4/5 – Excellent name play
Have Ya Beef Spiral like a Pin Wheel..Always Lookin for a Win Still..
And The Only time E's on "streak" is Wen Thrown across Ah Wind Shield!!..
5/5 – consistency deserves a perfect score, excellent set up and punch.
Ya Hopeless Nigga!! you all wanna see me Choke This Bitch Huh!?..
Only Time Ev's Almighy is When your Referin to the Motion Picture!!..
3.5/5 didn’t like the set up, but the punch was genius
Never Hard always Soft as Shit plus there's No Typa Force In Ya Hits..
Ya Rep'll snap when its stretched like a condom comin Off Of Mah Dick!!..
3/5 – yuck…
Take Caution Wit This you should Forfeit Or Quit i gotta Flawless Victory..
Step Down!!! I just left you wit ya Head Down like You Warship Misery!!..
2.5/5 I’m assuming you meant “Worship Misery” –ok closer (Evolution is too good a name play to have this as your closer)

22/25 Damn near perfect battle verse Menace. Good shit here

Evolution:
My verse has been completed now you worthless as a fetus,
He couldn't find himself if he went searchin for his penis,
2/5 Ev, this was kind of a weak opener… multis were there but the punchline was damn elementary
Now whats the point of yellin man, that purpose is defeated,
I'll put you underground beneath the surface where ya feet is,
2.5/5 Again very nice multi but not much punch
These bars are so unearthly you'll be nervous when you read it,
Don't pray to me for mercy cause then church is what you needed,
2/5 Ev, I’m beginning to sense that you didn’t put much effort behind this battle
You couldn't 'stand' a chance, you got no senses of 'podiatry'
This battle's hand to hand, cause these weapon's don't apply to me,
2/5 I’m convinced you haven’t put any effort into this now…
Each rhyme's stiletto knives, it takes a second to divide a key,
These lines i spit it nice,.. I've invented what you try to be,
2/5 you’re multies are basically keeping you at an average level… but you’re dying in the punch/personal area
This guy forgets his 'type', you got no sentence of 'variety',
Now time to "ghett-o' life", I'll bring this Menace II Society,
3.5/5 Wow, you wait until the end of the round to actually throw a punch.. at least you landed.
13.5/25 Ev this was slightly below average for a battle verse, your topical’s more on point than your battle style.

Vote - Menace

lol Harsh Riggz....
Evolution's verse wasnt that bad heh.

But I must admit Menace had almost a flawless verse.
I am not going to break it down because it is quite clear who won this.

Vote = Menace

MenaCe Wins by KO...





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