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Insane with the brain
My frame is engrained
Naming the pain
Hasten the game
Wasting you lames
Who pasting ya names
Infront of the greats
Like Slithering snakes
Get dumped in the lake
Slam on the breaks
Losers who be winning the race
Move with a haste
Before I slap the taste
Right out of ya face
It’s a common place
To rhyme and rape
Um verbally
Cause the ways I be serving these
Herbs wit these
Turns and weeves
As I Burn the weed
You’ll urn to see
The top 0n his spot
Knockin your blocks
An Rappers who aint hip hop
To the tip top
I keep it real
Sneak and peel
Their caps with rap attacks
To snatch that cash
To get that grass
Stomp and mash em
Full fledged assassin
Wit No compassion
A pro in action
Whose flows are passion
And this is just a quick spit
Leaving wigs split
With rhyming fitness
Now with this
I can mangle a witness
As my fifth drips
Plunging your bitch clit
With more than a 6 inch
so bye for now
I’m off to get my dick licked

This one seems like it's on some Big Pun shit
like you just spazzed out when you wrote this
I like it....keep writing my dude

That was crazy. I like it...keep at it.

thanks for the feed uppin

Pretty Short lines Quick Pace Nice Multies With Possibly A nice Flow But Strays In Places Mayne This Wasnt Bad Overall Just Lines Were Too Short