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10 - lines huh? I rarely do less than 8 bars.. but I'll make an exception

Young Dosia you barely average, I been in this rap shit
Bout to take you down faster than the stimulus package

You got me last on your check list, but I’m leavin’ ya shook
Cause your verse is off key, like that bitch singin’ ya hook (http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/come- ... 15131.html)

I’m readin’ this rook, he’s climbin the latter to tread peeps
Be he couldn’t “excel” in battles if he was a “spreadsheet”

Talkin’ bout your album, this fake could never sell one
His raps too medium… they neither “rare” nor “well done”

Come thinkin’ you runnin shit, with that new boss stance
But your audios just “playin dead” like some Tupac Fans

that's it 10 lines huh? Bout as quick as your sex life aint it? - blah, your turn....

srrry just got home from watching that movie avatar...

if its ok i would like to drop tomorrw gonna crash if not take the dq win im tired lol

YungDosia wrote:srrry just got home from watching that movie avatar...

if its ok i would like to drop tomorrw gonna crash if not take the dq win im tired lol

..you young folk always runnin' late LOL.. it's cool with me. Whenever.. it's your thread.

Young Dosia you barely average, I been in this rap shit
Bout to take you down faster than the stimulus package

Lol, um but not very hard! 2.5/5

You got me last on your check list, but I’m leavin’ ya shook
Cause your verse is off key, like that bitch singin’ ya hook (come-over-tonight-jordan-soto-vt15131.html)

5/5 lol NICE!!!

I’m readin’ this rook, he’s climbin the latter to tread peeps
Be he couldn’t “excel” in battles if he was a “spreadsheet”

Excel/ spreadsheet shit sort of played. But you wrded it nice! 3.5/5

Talkin’ bout your album, this fake could never sell one
His raps too medium… they neither “rare” nor “well done”

Nice flow, not hitting very hard tho 2.5/5

Come thinkin’ you runnin shit, with that new boss stance
But your audios just “playin dead” like some Tupac Fans

4/5 Nice shit fam!

14/25

You a ho ass nigga! probly sell yaself for money, and he thinks thats good yall...
U a bitch! The Corners Ur Position...and i aint talking bout Football..!!

Honestly, not really feeling this, seems like you tried too hard! But this still came prtetty decent! 3/5

U spit hot shit? come on niggas Hell no...!
Riggz couldnt Text Fire...with a Burning Cellphone..!!

I was laughin on this one...all beefs aside nice shit! 4.5/5

Im going quiet easy on u, usually id make um fall flat or fall square...
In ur town u think u a star there??...Kid ur just playing withurself like Solitaire..!!

Meh, this has been done before but you came nice with it! 2.5/5

Only time he faded is with bald hair...Dont puff goody good he dont want that...
Shit id even front sacks..Just so he could say he smoked dosia...But only in a Blunt Wrap..!!

SHit was nice, Not the best but def Good! 3.5/5

See my 'Punches' do the work...u can keep tlking bout how u shoot tho...
But once i KO him...U gon see R.I.'s Hurt...like a Punctured Pupil..!!!

5/5 Nice closer, best bars by far!

18.5/25


overall vote Dosia

Miscalculated Quix
Riggz - 17.5
Dosia - 18.5
However, he still gets your vote by the math.

thanks for voting.

good battle riggz

1-0

Young Dosia you barely average, I been in this rap shit
Bout to take you down faster than the stimulus package

2/5. A good attempt, But didnt come off hard at all.

You got me last on your check list, but I’m leavin’ ya shook
Cause your verse is off key, like that bitch singin’ ya hook

5/5 FIRE, nuff said.

I’m readin’ this rook, he’s climbin the latter to tread peeps
Be he couldn’t “excel” in battles if he was a “spreadsheet”

4/5 Made me chuckle. Been awhile since I have heard that reference,

Talkin’ bout your album, this fake could never sell one
His raps too medium… they neither “rare” nor “well done”

3/5 Not a very hard diss, But a nice personal.


Come thinkin’ you runnin shit, with that new boss stance
But your audios just “playin dead” like some Tupac Fans

5/5 That was hard, and a great closer.


19/25



You a ho ass nigga! probly sell yaself for money, and he thinks thats good yall...
U a bitch! The Corners Ur Position...and i aint talking bout Football..!!

2/5 Wasn't feelin it.

U spit hot shit? come on niggas Hell no...!
Riggz couldnt Text Fire...with a Burning Cellphone..!!

5/5 FIRE!!(I dont give a shit he should get a 6.)

Im going quiet easy on u, usually id make um fall flat or fall square...
In ur town u think u a star there??...Kid ur just playing withurself like Solitaire..!!

3/5 I like it. Old idea, but nice wording.

Only time he faded is with bald hair...Dont puff goody good he dont want that...
Shit id even front sacks..Just so he could say he smoked dosia...But only in a Blunt Wrap..!!

3/5 I cant place my finger on it, But this bar seems to be missing an element. Good idea though.

See my 'Punches' do the work...u can keep tlking bout how u shoot tho...
But once i KO him...U gon see R.I.'s Hurt...like a Punctured Pupil..!!!

4/5 A good closer,


17/25

Good battle to you both.

Vote = Riggz

hmmm....?

YungDosia wrote:hmmm....?

Do you question every vote that goes against you or you just really think you're unbeatable?

no i dont question every vote against me...and do i look unbeatable to u or something? Riggz, If u want me to get honest with u bout this battle ill pm you why i said that.

1-1, PM me Dosia.. uppin for votes.

Young Dosia you barely average, I been in this rap shit
Bout to take you down faster than the stimulus package

Played....

You got me last on your check list, but I’m leavin’ ya shook
Cause your verse is off key, like that bitch singin’ ya hook

LOL......nice

I’m readin’ this rook, he’s climbin the latter to tread peeps
Be he couldn’t “excel” in battles if he was a “spreadsheet”

Very nice

Talkin’ bout your album, this fake could never sell one
His raps too medium… they neither “rare” nor “well done”

liked this one, good wordplay


Come thinkin’ you runnin shit, with that new boss stance
But your audios just “playin dead” like some Tupac Fans

could of been worded better but nice






You a ho ass nigga! probly sell yaself for money, and he thinks thats good yall...
U a bitch! The Corners Ur Position...and i aint talking bout Football..!!

lol, didn't know here u were goin with this at first but i liked it

U spit hot shit? come on niggas Hell no...!
Riggz couldnt Text Fire...with a Burning Cellphone..!!

nice

Im going quiet easy on u, usually id make um fall flat or fall square...
In ur town u think u a star there??...Kid ur just playing withurself like Solitaire..!!

didn't like it

Only time he faded is with bald hair...Dont puff goody good he dont want that...
Shit id even front sacks..Just so he could say he smoked dosia...But only in a Blunt Wrap..!!

heh heh nice

See my 'Punches' do the work...u can keep tlking bout how u shoot tho...
But once i KO him...U gon see R.I.'s Hurt...like a Punctured Pupil..!!!

ehh, not bad



close battle, but i'd say overall i'd go with Riggz


Vote=Riggz

I think you lack the posts Gizmo.. but thanks for taking the time. 1-1 still uppin'.

Dosia check your PM.. you should now understand what I'm talking about.. no need to discuss any further right? Right! Holla at me later.