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Crack as usual..I expect nothin less from my sensei

ThoUghT
Food 4 ThoUghT N E 1?

Hooked on Something You Don't Quite Get Yet..
Wonder If You'll Have To Bounce With Regret Left..

Not Bad Opener

Waiting On This Phone Call i Feel Like ima Hit The Lottery
Am i Sensitive If It Bothers Me? Nah Cause Outbursts Logically
Turn Each ya Steps Inta ya Souls Pottery..Till You offer Galleries
That Kepted You Balanced Like a Salary..Tell Me Who Fathaed Me?
I Stare At The The Sun Like Theres More To Life i Gotta See...

Mayne This Had Some Nice Lines Nice Last Line Here Especially

I Needa Shine But Thought Of You Hollering Bleeds My Mind..
Are You Gunna Relieve My Time? Was That The Plan Or Do i Need a Sign?

Aye Nice Multies Flowed Well

Do i Need To Stop Cause I'm Talking Crazy ??
Do I Need a Stray Jacket or a Walk In Baby ??
Railly the Vibes are like Isralies,Blowing Up Bloody Merry

Damm Nice Bars Right Here

Scary, I Should Just Relieve The Cherry N Put The Spark Out
Its 2:40 in The Morning its Pretty Fucking Dark Out
Nighttime Tripping On a Dark Route, Sorry if i Bark Out
I'm Far from a Dog..If u Wanna just Keep Moving i'm not Down to Live in a Parked House ..

Mayne Nice Finish Here Maybe A Bit Stretched At The End But Not Bad

Overall Nice Piece Here

"I Needa Shine But Thought Of You Hollering Bleeds My Mind..
Are You Gunna Relieve My Time? Was That The Plan Or Do i Need a Sign?" - nice Amb---

all around nice syllables and i understood where you were going with it.