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Dosia Who? its Over Doser Heeth Ledger in The Flesh
Death Calls Thru 1800 Collect While i Hold The Toaster
Your Goal Is Over, u ain't Make It Though, NO, So
Took too to find the rhyme structure here, but the multi was tight 3/5
I'ma Take This Slow like movie for the Mentally Challenged
I Put Dollars i'll Make Ya Fall Whats The Sense Ta Keep Balance?
“I Put Dollars… What’s the Sense”? Is that the English language Amb? 2/5

Talent Is Something you SLACK ON!.. Lyrics Worn Out Classy ..
You Couldn't BEN IT UP Like Ligaments Are Torn Out Badly !! ..
“Lyrics Worn Out Classy”… forced set up, punch was ok 2.5/5
Fuck It This Ain't a Battle Verse Like Football in The Desert End Up On Rattled Turf,
“Fuck It This Ain't a Battle Verse”.. so far it hasn’t been Amb 2/5

He's a Snake In Disguise I'ma Make The Lion Pray Like Staking In a Pride,
Mason ya Side Like Enlightened Ones,Hang Ya Bitch Over a Bon Fire If you Playing The Clyde, Uh!!

..as in Clyde Mason Story?... ok ok.. I’ll give you that one 3/512.5/25
Dosia
Your not dope, and not hard hope you got my point?
you a pussy!....
we wouldnt see "Ambition as a ryder" on a tupac joint!!
Average set up but Nice punch 3/5

Maybe you should put the mic down...try to take up ball...
Cuz after this KO battle....
Im sure "A.M." will finally get his wake up call!!!
Set up no, punch yes 3/5

Kid knows he has no chance of winning...u fuckin wit a rap vet!
And this niggas holding on by a thread......that i attached to his neck!!!
Nice 3.5/5

Lil fag ull get decked...plain and simple man!
Cuz ur text aint reaching me...like ya phone signals jammed!!!
Another nice punch 3/5
Bitch heres a hollow tip, swallow this acknowledge this....
All my respect went out the window for u.....and nigga u should follow it!!!!
Nice set up but the closer was blah 2.5/5
15/25
Content: Dosia
Metas: Amb
Flow: Dosia
Punch: Dosia
Multis: Amb
Enjoy: Dosia
Dosia takes both Cats and Points for my vote

Thanks For Voting

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Dosia Who? its Over Doser Heeth Ledger in The Flesh
Death Calls Thru 1800 Collect While i Hold The Toaster
Your Goal Is Over, u ain't Make It Though, NO, So
Rhyme scheme is jacked up here.
I'ma Take This Slow like movie for the Mentally Challenged
I Put Dollars i'll Make Ya Fall Whats The Sense Ta Keep Balance?
Clever. could of been harder but still decent
Talent Is Something you SLACK ON!.. Lyrics Worn Out Classy ..
You Couldn't BEN IT UP Like Ligaments Are Torn Out Badly !! ..
Dope punch. I liked this
Fuck It This Ain't a Battle Verse Like Football in The Desert End Up On Rattled Turf,
He's a Snake In Disguise I'ma Make The Lion Pray Like Staking In a Pride,
nice flip on the bar scheme. 1st line was dope and nice play off of the 2nd line.
Mason ya Side Like Enlightened Ones,Hang Ya Bitch Over a Bon Fire If you Playing The Clyde, Uh!!
Clever, decent.

Your not dope, and not hard hope you got my point?
you a pussy!....
we wouldnt see "Ambition as a ryder" on a tupac joint!!
Decent, could of hit this harder tho
Maybe you should put the mic down...try to take up ball...
Cuz after this KO battle....
Im sure "A.M." will finally get his wake up call!!!
Nice personal. I'm diggin' this
Kid knows he has no chance of winning...u fuckin wit a rap vet!
And this niggas holding on by a thread......that i attached to his neck!!!
played...
Lil fag ull get decked...plain and simple man!
Cuz ur text aint reaching me...like ya phone signals jammed!!!
kinda played as well
Bitch heres a hollow tip, swallow this acknowledge this....
All my respect went out the window for u.....and nigga u should follow it!!!!
Nice. Loved the closer

Flow = Ambition
Multies = Dosia
Punches = Dosia
Personals = Dosia
Final Vote = Dosia

Ambition - Seemed rushed and lack any type of personal or hard hitting punch. I liked the way you changed your scheme up and approached differently.

Dosia - A couple of played lines but harder hitting personals and punches. The multies spiced the flow up and was pretty sick (esp. the last bar)

nah this is 2 Slow lol 2-0 Sounds Good.

upping

Punches:Dosia
Multis:Amb
Flow:Dosia
Name/wordplay:Amb
Personals:Dosia
Enjoyment:Tie

vote goes to dosia