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How Y'all doin' out there *ahem*

View the inner workings, where the heart enters hurting
front door hanging, windows covered cuz winters observent
my mailbox keep staying let down, left out, hate mail, shed doubt
with the power to light up anything that left me let down
this is memory lane, where they keep driving by my memorie's gate
if ever he change, then our friendships will never be same
we don't live parallel, do I really need to say more
fuckers with no convo, so all I stay next too I nay bore's
let the flow give out, get a grey lawn while it's rained on
a curb to keep the mud scraped off, so fuck all the hate talk
garbage can that's placed on the same spot they place dogs
get placed in the same place where you Sean Kingston'd get that face drop'd
I stay in a home where the thoughts stay drawn hung on my great wall
never broken down, fluck it I'll be here when your Gang is GONE
sometimes my thought is over the wall, so I gotta say it wrong
Ghengis Khan, gang is gone, flame in palm, promethues pen
take heads off, cleaver hen's, straight out the slaughterhouse
leave em dead...boredom is my friend and hatred is my wife
so if that bitch act up tell her divorce is the matron of life
face it I'm nice.....and bored

nice flow man
that gang is gone, gangis kon shit was great...
dug the flow for a quick flow.. nice drop homie

keep um coming

finally someone drops something out of the norm.. I was looking for metaphoric babbling (just had a taste for it) and this soothed me.. "sometimes my thought is over the wall, so I gotta say it wrong
Ghengis Khan, gang is gone, flame in palm, promethues pen" -- haha! favorite line QZ.. thanks man, I needed this.

Flow was on fo shur...didn't feel it at parts! but overall i agree wid the above cats...def original! Nice shit Q!

Yeaa man definatly is diffrent from the usual around here . I LIKE IT

I thought the flow was pretty consistant throughout and i liked the vocab

Fav bars :
my mailbox keep staying let down, left out, hate mail, shed doubt
with the power to light up anything that left me let down

leave em dead...boredom is my friend and hatred is my wife
so if that bitch act up tell her divorce is the matron of life

haha..yeah i agree with most of'em about it bein defferent ..pretty funny at times..keep doin ya thing...

this is ill, forreal, you have talent i dont think people recognize enough when you stop just rhyming a few syllables at a time and start putting real thought into metaphors and shit, good stuff man keep it comin

come on......as Ma$e would say