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The beat seemed alright and I liked the subject matter on this track. Your lyrics where alright but I had a hard time with your flow. It felt like you where reading it and because of that had more monotone effects and fell off the beat a few times. The quality isn't too good but being someone who has been in a situation with only shitty equipment I can't fault you for that. The advice I could give you is maybe too memorize your verse to be more on point.

your right i'll keep dat in mind

Weird Sense wrote:The beat seemed alright and I liked the subject matter on this track. Your lyrics where alright but I had a hard time with your flow. It felt like you where reading it and because of that had more monotone effects and fell off the beat a few times. The quality isn't too good but being someone who has been in a situation with only shitty equipment I can't fault you for that. The advice I could give you is maybe too memorize your verse to be more on point.

I don't know Weird.. shit worked for Mace and 50' that slow drag flow. I got that type flow too.. so I understand the vibe... I kind of dig CEO's style.. like fuk it.. doesn't work as well on fast tempo beats, but I would say stick to 90-110 tempo beats, with nice old skool samples, maybe laid back Gangsta funk, dig in the scene with the gangsta lean.. type shit.

i can feel dat i understand what u gettin at much luv

you have to work on your delivery and emotion, i thought it was boring and i couldn't even vibe with it. just really get into it, make sure you stay on beat

o k