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a lil sumtn sumtn

Posted: Mon Jan 18, 2010 10:42 am
by Loon E Lou
lookin at myself
like where the fuck did I go wrong.
livin everyday
as if my life will always go on.
im all about ''today''
so I aint trippin off tomorro.
fuck its what I say
while I be blowin on this j.
this lifes a trip
like here to kurse's state
salinas where my gorillas stay
when the lyrics spray
I shoot em straight
neverminding what these nothins say
I shit on em
then urinate.
all my tracks they sure to hate.
these fakes is square like wooden crates
but I stay high in outer space

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Re: a lil sumtn sumtn

Posted: Mon Jan 18, 2010 10:52 am
by Loon E Lou
good look. i agree dawg. haha. jus tryna expand the options a lil bit. ill take that an roll wit it.

Re: a lil sumtn sumtn

Posted: Thu Jan 21, 2010 1:47 am
by ~TITAN SPITEFUL~
it was hard to catch tha flow but i was feelin tha structure nigga

when the lyrics spray
I shoot em straight <--- i liked this bar tha best keep droppin homie

Re: a lil sumtn sumtn

Posted: Thu Jan 21, 2010 3:25 am
by Loon E Lou
good shit dawg appreciate the look

Re: a lil sumtn sumtn

Posted: Thu Jan 21, 2010 7:10 am
by QwarterZ
Yea this was aight....not the best tho'
I haven't heard your audios but I think I will peep
n drop comparison....otherwise keep writing!

Re: a lil sumtn sumtn

Posted: Thu Jan 21, 2010 7:27 am
by Loon E Lou
yea dawg i think i bust better on audio. all the audio gotta start sumwer tho