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The Quix identity

Chapter 1

Wasn't a lucky child i was Born in tah Poverty
3 brothers 3 sisters like mah father was robert Reed
had no support from mah parents, they wouldn't Talk tah Me
Probably, cuz they felt slangin drugz was making a mockery
of my family but they gradually started to see mah point
alcohaolic tendenceies they would just steal mah joints
and dip into mah stash box so all i'd Feel is coins
i had no choice but to deploy and escape from mah peeps
resorted tah thugz and feigns to learn the way of the street
i was living the struggle rappin n snappin just waiting tah Bubble
My Rhymes were mah brain while the gauge was mah muscle
going insane, doing just about anything for Respect
the streets was mah family, through mah parents neglect
No school, but by the age of 16 i graduated the Tek
had a Masters in Semi's and a doctrine in coke!
things were looking up cuz now mah product was dope
invested mah profits in getting that Glock wid dah scope
Thought i did it quitely so the cops didn't know
but i got set up ... some nigguhz call it a sting
was on the top of the world ... but i falled from the Ring
used to living lavish coppin Fitted caps and New Topz
now the only luxerys are coming through the Food Slotz
dah only conversations are those with the criminals
Emotions running rapid can't help but feeling pitiful
but it was Typical ... theres a saying they say and they shout
you only serve two days ... the day you go in, and the day you get out ...

This was decent, was kind of a predictable tale to me but you had some good twists on lines that would usually be cliche and that made for some quotables. The storytelling was dope though, kinda felt like I was walking through it with you at some points but it could've been much better.

THANKZ Fellaz

ppreciate the feed TOYH n Diva!

the streets was mah family, through mah parents neglect
No school, but by the age of 16 i graduated the Tek
had a Masters in Semi's and a doctrine in coke!
things were looking up cuz now mah product was dope
invested mah profits in getting that Glock wid dah scope

that shit just sounded dope...

i liked it,, dont like how people call it predictable. its a story... or tale of you, and i get that.. really deep piece man, a lot of people get fucked by their upbringings and shit but if you can make a positive out of it more power to ya.

props on the tale man

peace stay ^

werd ^^ really ppreciate yah feed as allways modern!!

i was feelin it.
all in all another hard street nigga shit, keep it up.

much respect.

Werd thankz sos!


any more feed?

I'm anticipating part II (the adolescent years of Quix) lol, make a trilogy lol.

"the streets was mah family, through mah parents neglect
No school, but by the age of 16 i graduated the Tek
had a Masters in Semi's and a doctrine in coke!
things were looking up cuz now mah product was dope" --

This one thing tho, this is the typical "Thug to Riches" story so for Part II maybe throw us for a loop and tell us how you graduated from Yale or went to Law School and privately come on rap forums to mingle with peasants (Oh wait that's my life haha).