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Somethin' To Say pt III

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Somethin' To Say pt III

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Call me Jimmy Snuka I usually come off the top
if elevation is key then I can unlock the locks
free em, meditate their spirit they a loss for shots
my process take the subway put beef up n no footlongs
mad cuz when I'm listenin' the don't speak up n just look lost
cut thru these green eggs, call this the Sam-a-rye sword
heat up their plate, and see what this pan'll rize for?
when I say pan you could say bitch out the labyrinth
flip out the cavern, kill the descent and see no future
pitch out the lantern, get a source you Benzino loser!
yea erryone pen got crack till their shits put in rehab
now this Dr. Drew errythin' simple a few hooks n free jabs
I'm standin' at top, still on my grind doin' the Ali shuffle
still claimin' you stuntin' replay that it's just a body double
flow stay flippin' the boat, fluck runnin' streets MICHELIN ho's!
while I stay exposin' them smoke n mirrors the MAGICIAN CODE
if it's snitchin' homes, then I'm moving with the Cam wrong
hit me with a few shots I'm still makin' them joints like Cam'ron
stay with fly kicks, Hermes, I'm on a different level, different tourny
give em the greatest hit ANY WAY YOU WANT enjoy the JOURNEY....

fluck it I'm done LOL!!!!!!
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Re: Somethin' To Say pt III

Post by S.O.S »

seem more rushed than the other 2 lol still good tho.

i enjoyed readin it but nothin really jumped out at me except the last line
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Re: Somethin' To Say pt III

Post by Quix »

yup, this was not on the same level as the other 2....but thats what happens when you come crazy ILL .. peeps expect you to maintain that level!!


props on the whole 3 part series...keep an eye open for mah newest series!
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