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i'm graphicly-past those that be hatching-attacks
while grabbin-tha-mac i'm gradually bashin-em-back
hearts ashy-an-black so from cops i'm stashin-the-facts
the master-is-back locked, loaded n unlatchin-the-strap
put your cap-in-the-grass grey matter on-the-pavement
while calm-an-patient underground i'm bombin-basements
these palms-r-face-lifts emcees get knocked-n-slayed-quick
i talk-n-stay-sick my enemies get chalked-n-stay-stiff
so walk-away-quick before i change my mood-n-attitude
i'm rude-n-mad-at-u the teacher ll school-the-baddest-dudes
cool-n-strapped-wit-2 big balled i rule-wit-massive-jewels
i soothe-wit-graphic-tunes the dark hearted-n-demented
i departed-wit-intentions to come back sharper-wit-inventions
in darkness-i-am-mentioned cause in light im crushin-ya-ass
so don't rush-in-attack cause homie,, the punishers-back

damn homie ur multi's is crazy lol. good shit i was noddin my head just readin it

Crazy flow on this one doggy! whoa, you came nice with multies here tooo!!


i enjoyed this read famo!!

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these palms-r-face-lifts emcees get knocked-n-slayed-quick
i talk-n-stay-sick my enemies get chalked-n-stay-stiff
so walk-away-quick before i change my mood-n-attitude
i'm rude-n-mad-at-u the teacher ll school-the-baddest-dudes
^^^^^^^^^^^I was diggin' that

this shit was really off the chain...I'm diggin' it
really had some dope multi's on it
had some imagery in it aswell....keep writing!

"these palms-r-face-lifts emcees get knocked-n-slayed-quick
i talk-n-stay-sick my enemies get chalked-n-stay-stiff"

Way to work on the multi's Def.. the flow was there as well, now.. work on complexity (using vocab with multies) cat's won't be able to fuk with you.

It's only so many times you'll be able to change around "A"-"ick" syllables before it get's played. Feel me?

thanks for the feed fellaz still uppin this piece