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8 Bars (16 lines)
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Due: 24 Hrs.
Whoever done first, drop.

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Check...when I get off home I'll key something up so we can get this started. 1

My bars'll leave you black and blue, ya bitch cunt, with wounds a doc would have ta sew and stitch up
but the only way I'd take shots from your bars is if you owned a strip club

He probly smells like a Pakistani and whys he actin' manly
when the only thing Jacks rippin' is the panties off a hooker that's a tranny

This fag was like, " What can I do ta seem tough and not appear a bullshitter ? "
so you chose to name yourself after a motherfuckin' serial killer ?

You probly act like you stack chips, rock ice, and crack flip
Pussy, please, the only time you're pushin' kis / keys is when you type that wack shit

Stop disrespectin' Method Man, bitch ass, you gotta be the lamest
cuz with a name like Jack Da Rippa, I bet LLs probably ya favorite

You're a lyin' lame fuck and I think it's time you gave up
cuz your text is never hot like every girl that you try ta game up

My rhymes are heavy like a manatee, so how you gonna damage these
when we don't see eye to eye cuz you don't stand a fuckin' chance with me

I'll floor you like tiles, so you should be careful when you choose a rival
cause for battlin' with me your avatar should be flashin' " suicidal "

U could swear that the beef is best at, when I tear and conceive his neck back
Coz if I pull guns, this "pussy aint movin', like "parapalegic sex acts"

I'll tear thru ya fleece and sweats jack, bet that! it explodes wit an anger
The most wit a banger, that'll "Leave-Eyes Blue", like they "clothes on a hanger"

Got you choked, broke, and in danger, I ignite flows to verse these lames
The mic blows purpose flames, while 360 drop more "Bull over the Net" than "Chicago/Jersey games"

The gun rips ya clogged pipes and ya spleen, Fuck clips, we can box/fight on the scene.
Coz 360, the only time I fuck wit a "X BOX" is when I "click the top right of ya screen"

Tha kid that drops mics in ya dreams, I'm scary, I'll put the fist to ya cordes
clinch wit a force, I peep you like "girl surfers" just another "Bitch on a board"

IL's new bread, a newb please? I'll smash ya face, the free hard so tap the breaks
Collapse ya faith, with guns that'll "smack ya chest", like "retards and patty cakes"

A fee charged, pass the plate, I shell flows, even the pin is dead
A friendless thread, cos Rip like a "Terriost list backwards" crowds "Yell Ohh" when I'm "red"

360 can't free or stick me, but of course his dick ryders'll say he came with it
But save the gimmicks, coz duke gettin' "shut down" quicker than suspect "pain clinics"

thx uppin

360
My bars'll leave you black and blue, ya bitch cunt, with wounds a doc would have ta sew and stitch up
but the only way I'd take shots from your bars is if you owned a strip club
2/5 – BARS/Strip Clubs.. done before
He probly smells like a Pakistani and whys he actin' manly
when the only thing Jacks rippin' is the panties off a hooker that's a tranny
1.5/5 – Pakinstani/manly is not a set up, it’s a filler… not relevant to the punch at all.
This fag was like, " What can I do ta seem tough and not appear a bullshitter ? "
so you chose to name yourself after a motherfuckin' serial killer ?
2/5 – put together well, but not much of a punch here
You probly act like you stack chips, rock ice, and crack flip
Pussy, please, the only time you're pushin' kis / keys is when you type that wack shit
2.5/5 Push keys/typing played but I liked the way drop it.
Stop disrespectin' Method Man, bitch ass, you gotta be the lamest
cuz with a name like Jack Da Rippa, I bet LLs probably ya favorite
2/5 average line, not much punch or personal
You're a lyin' lame fuck and I think it's time you gave up
cuz your text is never hot like every girl that you try ta game up
2/5 witty, but has no umph to it
My rhymes are heavy like a manatee, so how you gonna damage these
when we don't see eye to eye cuz you don't stand a fuckin' chance with me
3/5 I liked this line nice word play too.
I'll floor you like tiles, so you should be careful when you choose a rival
cause for battlin' with me your avatar should be flashin' " suicidal "
4/5 There we go… nice personal nice punch nice word play, way to finish it
19/40 average for an 8 bar

Rippa
U could swear that the beef is best at, when I tear and conceive his neck back
Coz if I pull guns, this "pussy aint movin', like "parapalegic sex acts"
2.5/5 not sure I understood the beginning of your set up bar and pulling guns in text battles? Nice word play…kept it an average bar.
I'll tear thru ya fleece and sweats jack, bet that! it explodes wit an anger
The most wit a banger, that'll "Leave-Eyes Blue", like they "clothes on a hanger"
3/5 … feels like you not really battling 360 (almost pre-written feel), but it was a nice word play and punch. Just feels like you used it against some cat who called himself Blue Eyes or Dead Eye or somethin’ I don’t know…
Got you choked, broke, and in danger, I ignite flows to verse these lames
The mic blows purpose flames, while 360 drop more "Bull over the Net" than "Chicago/Jersey games"
3/5 liked the punch.. but again, feels like you just “added” 360’s name in there.
The gun rips ya clogged pipes and ya spleen, Fuck clips, we can box/fight on the scene.
Coz 360, the only time I fuck wit a "X BOX" is when I "click the top right of ya screen"
2.5/ This time you were direct at him, just now.. the punch is soft with all the gun talk
Tha kid that drops mics in ya dreams, I'm scary, I'll put the fist to ya cordes
clinch wit a force, I peep you like "girl surfers" just another "Bitch on a board"
2/5 Wow, bitch on a board, really? That line was used back in 2000
IL's new bread, a newb please? I'll smash ya face, the free hard so tap the breaks
Collapse ya faith, with guns that'll "smack ya chest", like "retards and patty cakes"
1.5/5 what’s with the gun talk? It’s getting repetitive and played.
A fee charged, pass the plate, I shell flows, even the pin is dead
A friendless thread, cos Rip like a "Terriost list backwards" crowds "Yell Ohh" when I'm "red"
1.5/5 Huh????
360 can't free or stick me, but of course his dick ryders'll say he came with it
But save the gimmicks, coz duke gettin' "shut down" quicker than suspect "pain clinics"

2/5 Wow, 360 has a name that you can play with all day, and this is what you finish with? Come on Rippa, how about “aimin” that gun you hypin’ about in your verse.
18/40
360 gets my vote on the point spread
Word of advice Rippa, you got the word play down pact; punches just need to be more updated and direct. Let go of the “old battle verses” notebook and get creative.
360 put more power into your punches.. try to make more of those finishers within your verse.
Close battle guys.

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PRETTY MUCH CO-SIGN! ^

Punches: Jack
Flow: JAck
content: Jack
personals: 360
enjoyment: Jack


ok this was closer than i made it look lol ... 360 is really close to becoming a greta text battler. but here i think Jack just out matched ya verse with harder punches and better content!!


props to both!!

vote Jack ... post in our battle now !!