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Got Damn you dumb Jack cause all that gun smack’ll get ya gums cracked
Those weren’t punches you threw in ya past raps, Nigga, those was fukin’ love taps

This cats no tough ass, fuk that, these text blades will leave ya guts slashed
I’m a best sellin’ author, dumb ass, I doubt you’ll get past sketchin’ ya rough drafts

Picked the wrong time to accept Riggz, so don’t expect wins just a cold slaughter
Shit I’m vexed Jack, so I’ll "piss on your text-rap" to see if your "dialect can hold water"

I can’t believe this dude would choose to get martyred, I’ll pop jewels in his armor
That’ll “noosin’” his collar Battlin’ Riggz is quite the "undertaking" like quakes on "funeral parlors"

Any verse you belch won’t be hard core felt Any beef ya speak converts to mince meat
Shit’s weak, ya bar's a cardboard belt, a fukin’ “waist” and could never “hold up” against me

Riggz get deep with raps that “Rippa” weak cat and trash da wackest of jargon
Price your keys Black; If your “style” is “free” Jack, then I just “slashed” it to a bargain

And you wanted some personals huh? It's w/e "Vet".



Yo...
I infest the facts of man, mashed and damned from the message of drastic hands
Have ya fam in plastic cans, and literally "stop Riggz on the street” like "congested traffic jams"

You a mess, and thats the plan, he pleads votes coz ya own style seems broke
The text wont disappear, but we all knew the "Mic Wood, Son", like ya "home ball team coach"

I'm so raw and Ri's smoked, I got mean jokes that'll trouble n bend ya face in cracks
But We all "Quix" to laugh, coz he tryna "stop after 1" like "Double penetration acts"

Just huddle and pretend to erase ya raps, have ya block in true shame
Imma pop thru frames and have a "line after Cletus_" like his "Yahoo name"

It's not a prob., dudes lame. Have ya crew slained, I done shook the site
Coz with those books you write be like “Chinese food n a dumpster”, it all “looks a like”

We all know I took ya life, cooked and knifed from the hands that cover you
And yeah, I’ve seen “Riggz hold a piece” but so did “Danny Glover too”

good battle..

nice drop Rippa (best i've seen from you so far)- uppin for votes.

Punches:JTR
Multis:JTR felt some of his were a more complex
Flow:Riggz
Name/wordplay:Riggz. loved da dialect can hold water line
Personals:JTR
Enjoyment:JTR

VOTE jack da rippa. it was a close one, dope battle guys

Punches: Riggz
Multis: Riggz
Flow: JTR
Name/wordplay: Riggz... that last line was pretty forced though
Personals: JTR... mainly cuz of the yahoo name line
Enjoyment: Riggz.. I dug his lines a lil more

overall, slightly below average battle... but not bad by any means.

Vote Riggz

Uppin'....

Hey, I'm cool wit it, dude's for real... so let's keep it movin'...

2-2 from my count

2 up

150 some views? Hell I've damn near forgot about this battle and Jack ain't online long enough to look at it that much.. so what the hell?
Can we get a final vote please? I'm ready to stop at 5 here. Battle's been open for 2 weeks.

Personals - jack
Punchlines - Tie
Flow - Tie
Wordplay - Riggz
Overall Enjoyment - Jack
creativity - Jack
Vote: JAck

I'm cool wid both you nigguz, so i droped a vote take it or leave it! Just think Jack had the better overall verse ... More direct and came a bit harder than Riggz! Reallll nice battle tho fellaz!!


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Jack wins 3-2

All votes accepted including noobs and haters!

Good battle Jack.