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Not directed at anyone in particular, just a bunch of bars I constructed that could be used in a battle sense...Aight, chyea, Yo...

Under seas "marine" I ain't weak I'll go down in a tub first,
So how the fuck you gonna say I come from the "sub" herbs.
I'll "shit" on ya bars, come for drinks I'vr supplied the "stool,"
Guys a "tool," applied for "mechanics" and got denied from school.
When I look at you I think, "Damn, this kid's a disgrace,"
Only time you seeing number one is if I piss in your face.
Brace yaself, duke strikes ya kayotik nerve and then you rape yaself,
Save a belt, pants down to ya knees even Jesus would pray for help.
Gettin' molested as a kid's the only time this fuckin' fag was felt,
Bars stink like skid-marks you're never one to hesitate 'N drag the smell.
I gagged and fell when I read ya script, ya rhymes are less than bitch,
Have you runnin' with ya "tail" between ya legs as ya "head" gets flipped.
Acting "coy-'N" shit, no offense but you'z one fuckin' annoying prick,
Watch as I destroy this dick like his moms when her unemployment slips.

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When I look at you I think, "Damn, this kid's a disgrace,"
Only time you seeing number one is if I piss in your face

LOL! that made me laugh.....either way this was purdy cool
I'm diggin' it as far as randomness goes....very nice piece
keep writing....and I'll check your other work

-- Tue Jan 26, 2010 1:37 pm --

When I look at you I think, "Damn, this kid's a disgrace,"
Only time you seeing number one is if I piss in your face

LOL! that made me laugh.....either way this was purdy cool
I'm diggin' it as far as randomness goes....very nice piece
keep writing....and I'll check your other work

yeah i agree this shit was hella entertaining for a diss.. good job man i liked your first 4 barres the best. good shiz man

When I look at you I think, "Damn, this kid's a disgrace,"
Only time you seeing number one is if I piss in your face



funny as hell ... but not a very hard punch!!


decent diss famo!

So how the fuck you gonna say I come from the "sub" herbs.


Stretch.

I'll "shit" on ya bars, come for drinks I'vr supplied the "stool,"
Guys a "tool," applied for "mechanics" and got denied from school.

second Line was Straight, could of had more Snap though.

When I look at you I think, "Damn, this kid's a disgrace,"
Only time you seeing number one is if I piss in your face.

Lmao funny shit.


Brace yaself, duke strikes ya kayotik nerve and then you rape yaself,
Save a belt, pants down to ya knees even Jesus would pray for help.

Wasn't so much a diss but a Threat.


Gettin' molested as a kid's the only time this fuckin' fag was felt,
Bars stink like skid-marks you're never one to hesitate 'N drag the smell.


Blam .. Good Shit i Like it.


I gagged and fell when I read ya script, ya rhymes are less than bitch,
Have you runnin' with ya "tail" between ya legs as ya "head" gets flipped.

i See you.


Acting "coy-'N" shit, no offense but you'z one fuckin' annoying prick,
Watch as I destroy this dick like his moms when her unemployment slips.


Lmfao... Good Closer, Some would say it's played But u Freshened it Up n it's Def a Hay ..

Anyways This Was Pretty Cool My Dude.. Room To Improve.. But Who Doesn't Need that .. Anyways

Stay Up N Keep Droppin ..