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This is gonna be the topic of my mixtape "Loveless" and uhh this song introduces what I'll be getting into. Feed would be appreciated.

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"You want to know why the love left? Why I’m so loveless?
Want to know why I ride alone? Cause we live together die alone.
Would I be forgiven if I atoned, for my sins when it’s time to go?
I want to believe, but I don’t know, so out of the ashes I arose.
Rebel I oppose any, demon devil I dispose many.
Atlas this world grows heavy, life you never should have met me.
Ask why my heart’s so empty, well full of hate evidently.
Used to think that heaven sent me, until the day I started to resent me.
Speak gently; never know who’s there, crying herself to sleep but who cares.
Find myself alone in a dark room, when a whisper says “you are doomed.”
Sorry, already know my fate, heroic but already sold my cape.
Alone walking this long road, how I feel only the song knows.
My arrival is biblical, my importance is miniscule.
So let’s meet at the interval, loveless emotions invisible.
We know this living is miserable, and that suicides cynical.
The situation is critical, a lost cause at his pinnacle.
Life’s getting colder by the season, though I hardly made it at least I’m still breathing.
You people can’t seize what I’m seeing, seeing ghost sometimes I think I’m dreaming.
Lost I don’t know who to believe in, why God? He never gave me a reason.
Worlds so cold, way below freezing, love stabbed me in the heart now she’s leaving.
And now I’m bleeding, black blood black heart ask Baby Jesus.
Nobody could have foreseen this, Kirk Garland lyrical genius.
Against All Odds we live, love there is none between us.
I guess you’ll never know what love is, that is till you’re loveless.

I’m not gonna pretend this life doesn’t feel endless; I have no interests only live for vengeance.
A mental prison yes I got a life sentence, sometimes I want to cock the nine and just end this.
Senseless emotions left me defenseless, loveless another word for relentless.
I’m so ahead of my time Mr. Jetson, but I spent most of that time just reflecting.
Now why do I succumb to the torment? My mind is a sword and my heart is a warship.
The love has aborted soaring out of orbit, I live what I spit I don’t just record it.
I’m still pushed by unknown forces; I’m a monster walk with corpses.
Yeah and I don’t know what your source is; got a little friend that can show you where the morgue is.
Dust settled only to find more fog, been through it all I fear no man or god.

God, why have you forsaken me, they hate everything that I was made to be.
Gift you gave to me, write so creatively, send shots Adam got to hate’em Eve.
Amazes me, hero that unsung, only love I have is my sons love.
One love…"

lyrics aint bad seemed like emotion but it sounded like you were whispering at the beginning you need to speak louder dont whisper shout mayne and you know anything you want mixin get at me