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4 bars... first to 5 votes and normal rules apply.

Punches
Flow
Wordplay
Multies
Enjoyment

-- Fri Feb 05, 2010 6:07 am --



you'll get chewed next, in this battle of wits ya brain's tardy
for showin up late i'll "abuse X" like college kids at a rave party

you're a girly man wit boobs on ya chest, there's bitch inside of you son
that's confused bout your true sex cuz your clit's the size of your thumb

literally "go fuck yourself!" with various heinous sex acts
X your "flow is straight shit" like you overdosed on X-Lax

X lacks.. skill!!, attempt to win wit 50 Cent raps and you'll "die for tryin"... you soft dude
you wouldn't have a "tough bone in ya body" gettin ass raped on Rikers Island... you lost dude

my bad bro just seen this ill get sometin together hold on

-- Fri Feb 05, 2010 10:54 pm --

Another faggot that’s-bi, wat the fuck go-fig…
If “hes not ready ta-die”, den stop “talking too-big”//*

“FUN wit KYs TO EZ”, so this shits rawl when hes stompd-n-da-bed…
Now im Stoppin-ya-cred, call this bitch “Kathy” cuz he only talks-on-da-web//**

Deres a cock-n-ya-head, he makes no sense in his flow so hes a fast-game-talker…
For this lesson itll cost ya, so ill put “dis trick” on da “court” like his last-name-walker***

So bitch watchya gonna tell-moe, cuz you don’t wana wondaround-me…well-go…
Ya flow cant catch ya if ya fell-slow, so is V A Underground G…. Hell-No//****

*in his script beginning of the end he said he talked to Big’s ghost and he wasn’t ready to die
**funkytoez is another name he goes by plus Kathy wolf is a girl that cant move or talk she can only type using some computer that attaches to her brain so she can only talk thru the web
***dis trick=district Vaughn walker was a district court chief judge
****I used to go by moe and I capd his initials VAUGHN


good battle bro

yeah good battle.. although I don't really dig when headz have to explain their lines with extra comments instead of letting them stand alone and be self explanatory... nonetheless it's a battle so it's all good. Anyways votes por favor.

Vaughn
you'll get chewed next, in this battle of wits ya brain's tardy
for showin up late i'll "abuse X" like college kids at a rave party

Decent punch / personal and nice multie

Xtaci

Another faggot that’s-bi, wat the fuck go-fig…
If “hes not ready ta-die”, den stop “talking too-big”//*

Kind of played but decent.

and

“FUN wit KYs TO EZ”, so this shits rawl when hes stompd-n-da-bed…
Now im Stoppin-ya-cred, call this bitch “Kathy” cuz he only talks-on-da-web//**


Nice and pretty original. Glad you explained it because nobody would probably get this.

Punches - Vaughn
Flow - Xtaci
Wordplay - Vaughn
Multies - Vaughn

Vote - Vaughn
Decent battle. After the first couple of lines, rest of the verse kind of fell off from both. Strong openers. Felt Vaughn was more consistant. Both similar styles.