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my emotions are dead havent felt shit for years
alive i cant quit or feel the drip of tears
in twisted mirrors i see what it is i could of been
but thats the past and it is now an i should of then
would i blend in this world grey in black an white
or end up a distored image reflected after nights
i've captured spite in the empty cold palms i have
had a horrible childhood but should i blame mom an dad
the wrong of man has troubled my thoughts and ideals
lots of people are fakes i wonder if theyll try real?
if my zeal takes the back burner would i survive
cause these words are my life i cant swerve the tides
you heard it right Modern's mind is a jungle of vines
i try to keep up with the pace but i stumble at times
i trouble my mind with the worries of man's wrongs
but even if my feet are battered an bruised i'll stand strong

my emotions are dead havent felt shit for years
alive i cant quit or feel the drip of tears
in twisted mirrors i see what it is i could of been
but thats the past and it is now an i should of then


UHHH !!! I Liked This yo .. Real Nice Opener,ur getting Better.
Real Foot in foot out kind Of Picture Depicted just from the 2 Bars.




would i blend in this world grey in black an white
or end up a distored image reflected after nights
i've captured spite in the empty cold palms i have
had a horrible childhood but should i blame mom an dad

Word.. Kind Of Reminding Me of My Own Style to be Honest,
This is Cool i'm Feeling it...N should U Blame Them ???


the wrong of man has troubled my thoughts and ideals
lots of people are fakes i wonder if theyll try real?
if my zeal takes the back burner would i survive
cause these words are my life i cant swerve the tides

NO! .. This Was your Falling Point in My opinion, just not Something that Kept Me grabbed.



you heard it right Modern's mind is a jungle of vines
i try to keep up with the pace but i stumble at times
i trouble my mind with the worries of man's wrongs
but even if my feet are battered an bruised i'll stand strong

haha, Cool Closer.. Pretty Decent Homie.
This Had a Spice of Lyrical.. i Don't Think The Title Fit Though,
N This verse Of urs reminds Me Of a Junior Hazard Style Lol.

I Liked this For the Most Part though.

Stay Up N Keep Dropping