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Punches:seq
Flow:tie
Personals:seq
Nameplay:yp
Overall: sequence

this battled was kinda one sided when u break it down by these cats i used... i mean yp ur verse was all name play n seem kinda forced ( maybe rushed ) i think u over looked this young cat ( sequence )

YP-

I Can Rap Off The Dome...Ive Listened To Ya Songs, Ya Need To Take Those Tracks Back Home...!
Becuz Its Apparent, The Only "Ok Joints You Got"....Attach Ya Bones...!!!

this was nice... smoothe to the point, a clear punch n personal... wasnt forced flowed nice..

Sequence-

i'm nothing like you, dude's stupid as fuck so it would be hard to dumber-you're-IQ
with that squeaky bitch voice, on the track he sound's younger-then-i-do,

Dosia's a paid-drug, this dude's a bitch he's wishing that he stayed-thug,
cause in the game " dosia anit pulling his weight " like under weighed-bud,

these two bars won you this battle imo. all the elements executed nicely..

vote: Sequence




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I gotta give that to SequencE... his was stronger all they way through IMO.. better punches, flow, creativity, etc.

Sequence you only 15 writin like that man??? Wow... you got TONS of potential... I was nowhere near as good as you at that age.

my vote for sequence.. more solid all the way thru..


oh favorite lines from each

dosia..Let Me Speak And Preach...Dude Gets No Respect In His Hood, Even They Said It Your Sweet...!
So He Uses The ATM Down The Block.....To Aquire Some Credit On The Streets...!!!

sequence..the instrumental master?, i floor emcee's like i was a mental-carpenter,
Your'e punches, laughing.. nah, only time yung kick's it with blunt's is with a pencil-sharpener

sequence came out swinging n connected wit this battle..
overall good battle ya'll.

Vaughn wrote: Sequence you only 15 writin like that man??? Wow... you got TONS of potential... I was nowhere near as good as you at that age.

thanks, but i have been battling and writing since i was like 12, lol. so it's still like 3 years or what ever,

good battle dosia,