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-- Tue Feb 09, 2010 12:19 pm --

im done just waitin on u to say ur done and ill post it

-- Tue Feb 09, 2010 7:21 pm --

ok bro once you drop ill post mine

It’ll cost ya maggot, when ya behind my bars lika stuck inmate…
He’s justa “lost lil faggot”, cuz hes always looking for his fuckin mate//*

Theres no duckin late, cuz these punches still leaven a scolding scar…
They’ll tear ur torso apart, and leave ya body strung out like ya multis are//**

Times all this is costn me, so why do you seem tense…
Its common knowledge that the “L’s” follow in sequence//****

So see bitch, no vocab you couldn’t flip words if ya on da floor from roofies…
And ya “killshot” wouldn’t be “dead on” if I made ya Se-Quencetin(see Quentin) Tarantino movies//*****

*in austrialia they call there friends mates plus your make babys with ur mate
**body strung together with strings of his guts like his multis are pointed and strung together by him using hyphens (strings)
****puff puff pass in the same order and like before 1-7
*****dead on and killshot are Quentin tarantino movies

Punches – tie
Nameplay/Personals - X
Flow, - Seq
Wordplay- Seq
multi's – tie

Seq
Have ya dripping like tags, illest mind's know one has ever feeled-you-fags,
Cause only time i saw " xtaci on the street " they were both sealed-in-bags,
3/5 I liked the punch but you forced “Feeled-you-fags” don’t think “Feeled” is a word.

Snap you twigs-into-two, this dude a battler, i get more wins-then-you-do
He must not be very popular cause who rock's with three shitty sigs-of-there-crew..
3.5/5 Nice could’ve ended the multi better (you-do/there-crew)

I'm more then a text emcee no doubt, the battle grounds know what i'm about,
And it's safe to say out in the hood, " xtaci used to selling out "
3.5/5 nice word play and set up, nice Name play

See i put an end to emcee's who they think they know-the-most, it's nothing close..
Cause the only time i seen " xtaci killing it " some one died from over-dose.. !
3/5 nice word play again, however another drug reference is getting monotonous, but it wasn’t it a bad punch
Nice verse Seq 13/20

Xtaci
It’ll cost ya maggot, when ya behind my bars lika stuck inmate…
He’s justa “lost lil faggot”, cuz hes always looking for his fuckin mate//*
2.5/5 bars/inmate is kinda played and punch seems forced

Theres no duckin late, cuz these punches still leaven a scolding scar…
They’ll tear ur torso apart, and leave ya body strung out like ya multis are//**
3.5/ nice multi/personal

Times all this is costn me, so why do you seem tense…
Its common knowledge that the “L’s” follow in sequence//****
3.5/ Haha nice punch, flow was off from the preceding 4 bars tho

So see bitch, no vocab you couldn’t flip words if ya on da floor from roofies…
And ya “killshot” wouldn’t be “dead on” if I made ya Se-Quencetin(see Quentin) Tarantino movies//*****
3/5 this was iffy to me, I kind of liked it after reading it a few times, but in some ways it seems forced and the set up didn’t prepare the delivery very well. (I do that too sometimes).
12.5/20
Close battle guys, I liked it. Seq pulls away with my vote by the hairs of his chinny chin chin.

Punches; Sequal
Nameplay/Personals; X
Flow; Tie - i cought both flows
Wordplay;Sequal
multi's; close but Sequal



Vote Sequal .. Just had the better all round verse. More direct and punches edged it!! Keep at it tho X you gettin pretty nice!!

@ Xtaci... Killshot's not a Quentin Tarantino movie... it was directed by John Madden.

Punches: Seq
Nameplay/Personals: Seq
Flow: Xtaci
Wordplay: Seq
multi's: Seq

Vote: Sequence