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Ask what as this punk shuckss gets slaughtered and turned to chuck
You aint a ladies man you just a virgin who lies but yearns to fuck
I’m concerned for shucks this battle is lope sided like scales in biggest loser
Cept you aint phat (fat) just inaccurate like guns with timid shooters
You mimic movers who can’t begin to box but think they roll tape
aint a criminal ugly bastard trade your bad teeth for some Coalgate
your flows ate with no remorse cause bro you know you aint shit
shucks thinks he’s tuff I’ll call his bluff cause he must be huffin paint chips
your blank script and faint replies no ghost on the mic it’s ghastly
I’m vastly past you laughing tossing Shuck’ss flows cause they is trashy
The M.D’s nasty while Shuckss couldn’t be sick wit script from hospitals
Who am I kiddin shuckss has no flow or rhythm so him winnings impossible

just looking for feed havent writen a battle verse in a while

You mimic movers who can’t begin to box but think they roll tape
aint a criminal ugly bastard trade your bad teeth for some Coalgate

^^^^^^^LOL that reminded me of some ol' LL ish

either way it was kewl, don't know if you woulda won?
or maybe you wouldve? I don't know tho', the multi's were there
the flow was too, the punches just weren't that good
then again I can't really talk LoL! nice write either way

Ask what as this punk shuckss gets slaughtered and turned to chuck
You aint a ladies man you just a virgin who lies but yearns to fuck

this had flow no realy big multis punch id have to say was below adverage 2/5 for this line

I’m concerned for shucks this battle is lope sided like scales in biggest loser
Cept you aint phat (fat) just inaccurate like guns with timid shooters

i liked the way you where goin with this flow was there nice set up liked the punch 4/5

You mimic movers who can’t begin to box but think they roll tape
aint a criminal ugly bastard trade your bad teeth for some Coalgate

like this flows there nice multis but punch was lacking 2/5

your flows ate with no remorse cause bro you know you aint shit
shucks thinks he’s tuff I’ll call his bluff cause he must be huffin paint chips

i liked that it was personal idk if you even knew it tho lol punch was weak but flows ate was a personal on him 3/5

your blank script and faint replies no ghost on the mic it’s ghastly
I’m vastly past you laughing tossing Shuck’ss flows cause they is trashy

this wasnt a very strong punch flow was good until the end you lost it a lil 2/5

The M.D’s nasty while Shuckss couldn’t be sick wit script from hospitals
Who am I kiddin shuckss has no flow or rhythm so him winnings impossible

this was probably the best line of the battle good shit 4/5

man your punches seemed a lil generic and really didnt attack him so as a battle verse it was a lil on the weak side flow was great tho... as a diss track this was solid... you still woulda beat shuckss tho cuz his shits weak

thanks i just gotta work on solidizing my punches

yea you got the flow down which is where i always lack lol you've got some good shit ive alwaysed liked your drops bro keep it up

still upping