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“How dare you look at me and cross on the other side of the street…”

Mutual (The Wanderer):
Rain Drops On The Ground Disputes Just Glare In Amazement
Claims Lost As You See That Girl Left For Dead On The Pavement
Shadows Of Crooks Smashed Glass Off In The Car On The Curb
Officers Cash Slipped In The Pocket Have Had No Trouble Observed
I Shout Things Out At Times But Ignorance Leaves Words Abolished
So Nothin Can Help Me Now Irrelevant Left To Be Never Acknowledged
People Complaining About My Prescense So They Open With Slurrs
They Left Me In The Shadows But Still I Shouted Hopin They'd Turn
The Dual Aspect Of The Situation Has Very Rarely Been Felt
The Rich Stay Rich The Poor Are Left To Fend For Themselves
The Streets Manifested Macabre,Hidden In My Vernacular Teachings
To No Avail No One Listens Because These Bastards Are Speaking
The Modern Day Troubles Straight To The No's Like A Fragrance
All The Horrors And Mysteries Straight From The Heart Of A Vagrant

Hook:
On the block where I squat… ain’t no concubines in pyramids
A long reach for sheer abyss no squeakin’ by appearances
Fearlessness and pressure can’t make it without the patience
No Mercy, Come take the journey Through the Eyes of a Vagrant

Riggz (The Ragamuffin):
I used to be a back row tobacco spit gat tote kid
With a hair trigger so thick it had an afro pick
Fully driven, with a pulley system that permitted single shots fired
Cracker-jack type kid who didn’t need to hot wire
Benz on the corner swap tires morphed to busted rides
Merely traded engines when that bucket of rust died
A customized Hyundai with a Taxi’s windshield
Big Riggz fender spinnin on some nasty pimp wheels
I jacked an 8 track stereo from an alley way LTD
Roaming gnome made it my home yesterday to sell CDs
Tackled on the wrong side of the tracks tragic with base hits
Nursed a jack daniels stayed sick with FANTA and grape fizz
Preachers condemn me as a manner of Satan damned & forsaken
Branded a pagan when I should’ve been a glamorous vagrant

Hook:
On the block where I squat ain’t no concubines in pyramids
A long reach for sheer abyss no squeakin’ by appearances
Fearlessness and pressure can’t make it without the patience
No Mercy come take the journey Through the Eyes of a Vagrant

QwarterZone (The Vagabond):
Look what these savers earn, as the years pass and these papers burn
this cardboard sign, this razor'd curve, this needle and these razor burns
these cuts and these major curb's, paper chasers and hater's yearn
double coated flavors churn, the worlds in a pimp cup savor'd curd
we cut cheese only to make bread, turn the lover's into baseheads
cut the deck and change heads, while the government views is race-est
the guards rape the language, then steal the voice of the lament
cursing the adverse, adjacent, so we chasin' the coin for placement
while y'all fillin' you cups, I'm sittin', chillin', willin' for trust
broken dreams with dealin's as lust, hands switch and I'm unwillin' to cusp
shake or agree that buildin' is us, fallin' emergency, emerging weak
everything that's absurd to me and won't really have worth to me
sheltered in a city where they show no pity the world got so shitty
this toilet bowl'd starlet, made me view the world at it's darkest
quickly declining and shifting, now this blanket is all I harness
I can't fly cuz they don't let me out the limits, they changed a survivor's image
if you survive a wreck then you can defintly make it your spinach
I hate it, nothings changing and I'm a sideplayer, the eyes of a vagrant!!!

Hook:
On the block where I squat ain’t no concubines in pyramids
A long reach for sheer abyss no squeakin’ by appearances
Fearlessness and pressure can’t make it without the patience
No Mercy come take the journey Through the Eyes of a Vagrant

Mutual is improving rapidly. I must say that this kind of topic captures the best parts of your writing.

Riggz verse was interesting, maybe slightly bland.

Honestly, I thought that Quarterzone killed it, and it was a great verse to end on.

Aiight Thanks For The Feed TOYH & Plex And I Gotta Say All The Verses Were Nice But QZ Woo The Flow And Multies Were Immense

'Preciate the feed TOYH/Plex.

I felt this collab had a lot to offer from different angles.
Mutual with a metaphorical type flow
Riggz with the street/multies
QZ with the excellent wordplay and flow.

Nice guyz.

Thanks For The Feed

I used to be a back row tobacco spit gat tote kid
With a hair trigger so thick it had an afro pick



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oh shit dawg your on fire, i'll hate to be the one battling you cuss i sure will get raped

^^^ Gotta love the haters!^^^

aye peeps stop hatin more feed if you feed i always return

i wasnt hating i really thought his verse was bitch made. the other verses came alright i cant leave good feed cuss i'm not to much of a big fan for topic drops