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Plex
Theoneyouhate

Retrace my verses, the place, the purpose, as I shaped the youth
ever since your false perceptions; you have escaped your truth
remember u couldn't wear my shoes; you couldn't lace my boots
we both came up from the underground, but I placed your roots
as I wait for his great excuse; I'm going to start where I left off
want to see a-tribute to his success then, read a complex drop
I'm like the next pac, poetry-wise, without those emotional ties
its time to open your eyes, I wont drown in your ocean of lies
you'll never be an opponent of mine or come close to my rhymes
because I write holy divine I literally put my soul on the line
I'm only defined by the moment in time in which I dominated
but now the genres faded, and they remember how strong I made it
so what if I complicated on a constant basis to accomplish greatness
I tolerated all the hatred and jealously because I was intoxicated
that's how I operated, way too often, now I cant stop feeling nauseous
when I deal with the realest topics, every drop is like a healing process
as I reveal my progress, both literally and figuratively, I'm just obnoxious
can't stand losing, stuck in my winning ways like a fucking hostage
in a cage, nothing but a mosh pit, a frigging slave to this office
I've paid homage and the congress, all my profits, been to cautious
exhausted but re-energized, yes, I've exemplified that men have died
cuz of their tremendous pride, I generalize then again I also end the lives
this is lyrical genocide times ten, I bend your mind with splendid rhymes
keep my antenna high and my eyes on the central prize my enterprise

Just When Tha Blood Vessles in My Eyes Start Gettin Thin
i'll Defecate On You Faggots i Spit Nails And Shit With Pens
i'm Known To Spark Riots That'll Have Ya Thinkin Obama's Campaignin Again
Just When Tha Skies Start To Clear i'll Make Tha Clouds Start Rainin Then
i Gotta Short Fuse But My Ora Burns Brighter Than A Halogen Light
it's Like A Sightin Of Me is Biblical i Leave Opponents Nailed When i Write
Just When Ya Start Thinkin i'm Too impared To Write
it's Like i'ma God Your Prayers in Sight i Wont Spare Your Life
i Sit 'Em Down And Shut 'Em Up Quick Like A Pair Of Strikes
i Line 'Em Up And Kill 'Em Off Like A Cancerous Parosite
i've Led A Rocky Road i Could Easily Climb Killamanjaro
i Hope Ya Dont Forget Me Cuz i Could Easily Kill Tomorrow
Haiti Was Nothin When i Roar Tha Tides Come in And Tha Earth Shakes
They'll Be Askin Ya Worse Fate, April First.. Tha Ones Birthdate
Blessed With An Awful Gift i Keep 'Em Holdin Mics With Natious Grips
More Than An Awful Wish i Kill 'Em Off Quicker Than Auschwitz
i'm Willin To Bet You Jews Are More Than Humble Now
Joshua's Been Known To Make Foes And Walls Tumble Down
Dont Believe Me? Grab A Bible And Read Or Seek My Scripts
My Shit's Deeper Than Seas And Wits Now Ya See i'm Pissed
i'm More Potent Than Beer But Never Compared To Liquor in Glasses
i'm Always Overlooked By Opponents 'Til i'm Kickin Their Asses
My Rhymes Are More Than Mesocephalic So You'll Feel 'Em With Ease
When You're in Tha Pressence Of Greatness You Best Kneal To Your Knees

I Have Nothing 2 Say... I Dont Think The Rest Of The Site Either!!

Wordplay, Rhyme Scheme, Vocabulary n Metaphors Pretty Much In Their..
I Would Call This Art Deeper Than Rap

^ your retarded.

very medicore verses from both.

plex - pretty cool. good standard verse. nothing to write home to mom about though.

t1uh - flow seemed real choppy, retarded punchlines.

that is all.

Pryde wrote:^ your retarded.

very medicore verses from both.

plex - pretty cool. good standard verse. nothing to write home to mom about though.

t1uh - flow seemed real choppy, retarded punchlines.

that is all.

Fair enough.

ThaOneYouHate wrote:Lol it's Apparent Someone Dont Understand Tha Concept Of Multies.. But Ayyy.. Hate When There's No Feed Left When i Actually Take Time To Write instead Of Just A Five Minute Key...

Plex You Showed Me Somethin Completely Diff On Msn... Although Tha Change isn't Bad.. You Held Your Half Of Tha Collab Down Nicely.. Smooth Flow Throughout Tha Piece... Not Too Many Punches.. Tha Ones Ya Brought Were Hard Though...

Word. It was going nowhere. I had to scrap it.

The battles never over..
but its been insane, struggling to finish in the winners lane
if I sin for fame will I be celebrated like the winter games
I elevated, cuz I rhymed nicer, until I became a fine writer
in this textcee galaxy, I was the little star that shined brighter

complexity wrote:

ThaOneYouHate wrote:Lol it's Apparent Someone Dont Understand Tha Concept Of Multies.. But Ayyy.. Hate When There's No Feed Left When i Actually Take Time To Write instead Of Just A Five Minute Key...

Plex You Showed Me Somethin Completely Diff On Msn... Although Tha Change isn't Bad.. You Held Your Half Of Tha Collab Down Nicely.. Smooth Flow Throughout Tha Piece... Not Too Many Punches.. Tha Ones Ya Brought Were Hard Though...

Word. It was going nowhere. I had to scrap it.

The battles never over..
but its been insane, struggling to finish in the winners lane
if I sin for fame will I be celebrated like the winter games
I elevated, cuz I rhymed nicer, until I became a fine writer
in this textcee galaxy, I was the little star that shined brighter

I'm diggin' that lil' piece in your reply...
either way I thought this was greatly interwoven together
looks like you guys played offa each other....just not too badly
came together nicely tho', cool lil' vibe
keep writing!

plex ur verse was ill man, sick flow n multies, great read only line i didnt like was that hostage line, other wise i seen nothin wrong wit it... two thumbs up!!! "rappa"

toyh man ur verse was good but ur multies were either off or on which to me made the verse off an on, ( flow wise) but content was great good shit

"I'm like the next pac, poetry-wise, without those emotional ties
its time to open your eyes, I wont drown in your ocean of lies
you'll never be an opponent of mine or come close to my rhymes
because I write holy divine I literally put my soul on the line"

"Blessed With An Awful Gift i Keep 'Em Holdin Mics With Natious Grips
More Than An Awful Wish i Kill 'Em Off Quicker Than Auschwitz
i'm Willin To Bet You Jews Are More Than Humble Now
Joshua's Been Known To Make Foes And Walls Tumble Down"

nice verses guys...

I can't believe how much I actually hate that verse.

Thanks for the feed though.

Plex I dunno y u hate da verse but shit is def ill dawg u snoozin' on ur own shit sorry but u got off on it.
Da soul line was def ill felt dat, this was dope as well

I'm only defined by the moment in time in which I dominated
but now the genres faded, and they remember how strong I made it
so what if I complicated on a constant basis to accomplish greatness
I tolerated all the hatred and jealously because I was intoxicated.... haha one of my fav's 4rm ur part
ur whole drop was ill imo u def did u on ur verse

TOYH

4rm ur verse I felt dis haha

Haiti Was Nothin When i Roar Tha Tides Come in And Tha Earth Shakes
They'll Be Askin Ya Worse Fate, April First.. Tha Ones Birthdate
Blessed With An Awful Gift i Keep 'Em Holdin Mics With Natious Grips
More Than An Awful Wish i Kill 'Em Off Quicker Than Auschwitz

dat beer line had me rollin' tho did not expect dat

Overall I think you both balance urself's out when u do pieces like dis I enjoy readin' Plex verses cuz he always does sum dope shit wit punches same wit TOYH u also had good punches in ur piece

dope drop 2 both of you hope u guys keep droppin' more shit keep me posted.

Overall i think it was good

imo Plex held up stronger

Quotable-
"remember u couldn't wear my shoes; you couldn't lace my boots
we both came up from the underground, but I placed your roots"