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Devilish Motives

Posted: Wed Apr 21, 2010 9:26 am
by QwarterZ
Find me unraveled motivated only by one's hassle
till time finds ones sandals walkin' on water become tasseled
take the route in which heavens appreciate silenced thoughts
it's a priceless shot, followed by conspiracies and mindless plots
appreciation for each hidden camera focused on the regular wonders
while God's son is face down in a puddle recreatin' molecular structures
I stand here, witnessin' the times changin' feelin' like a advocate
tryna find a mask to fit so I won't be noticed in the planets grips
the cards authorize my motive, buyin' shit I don't need I'm hopeless
self concious? it's a possibility I'm tryna deliver Mr. Holland's Opus
criminalized by fate, but underestimated by erry sketchy detail
I think most people is mad cuz words ain't on track unless he derailed
my thoughts became insane, maybe not maybe I'm just de-ranged in fame
whatever that means....forget it I figured life would be easy within reign

-- Tue Apr 20, 2010 3:26 pm --

*ahem*

Re: Devilish Motives

Posted: Wed Apr 21, 2010 12:37 pm
by deafshady
i feel that, i can relate to it, nice drop bro, nuttin to criticism here...

Re: Devilish Motives

Posted: Wed Apr 21, 2010 7:24 pm
by M-Vario
I think this may be the first drop of yours that i have read. anyways i enjoyed it.

I am alost curious about the real meaning behind bars 1 and 3. all in all i thought it was put together well..flowed smooth and is worth a reread.

Re: Devilish Motives

Posted: Fri Apr 23, 2010 10:36 am
by Riggz
QZ, you still one of my favorite multi-syllable writers.
"take the route in which heavens appreciate silenced thoughts
it's a priceless shot, followed by conspiracies and mindless plots" -- nice.

Re: Devilish Motives

Posted: Sat Apr 24, 2010 6:37 am
by QwarterZ
word I'm tryna get in that Cam'ron zone...lol