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House Rules
Whoever get finished first drops
Due 24 hours after check in.

I'll use this as my check in. g/l

-- Sat Apr 03, 2010 7:47 pm --

where you at homie. Check in and I'll key somethin' up

-- Sat Apr 03, 2010 8:48 pm --

Screw it nigga..I'm bored anyways.

I'm on the streets with these raps, it's hard to beat the beast Jack when you speak and breathe ass
Dropped ya first battle to Cre@tive, so he gettin' "schooled a 2nd time"" like a "G.E.D. class"

You can feast on these jabs, juss weak kats that's facin' change and problems
He Audio? Naw. Juss "Major Paynes on the track" like it was "Damon Waynes joggin"

You gonna need to use a lotta tricks, ya prolly ripped coz this newb aint gotta fist
And we aint gonna talk sexuality, coz "Majors still undecided" like a "confused college kidd"

This dude don't use common sense, i'ts the same fucks that leave slained
The name sucks that he made, coz he read about smallpox and came up with his screen name???

I'm confused, seriously, it aint even bout a punch or fight now
If all that's left is pussies like this, yall might as well shut the site down

Duck and hide clown, coz how you gonna afford the punch from da fist
He the type to see my verse, fuget his password and pretend that the board doesn't exist

so i guess i will drop my verse today.

-- Mon Apr 05, 2010 7:37 pm --

call this a kids tutorial of murder, fun with Homicide/
jack ill rip'ya den refer to da real killer, leave him un-i-dentified/

can't believe you dropped a verse, knowing ill defeat him/
prolly wish he could NO SHOW, you aint here to SEEK-WINS/SequencE
(not a diss to SequencE)

ill take ya loot, jackpot when i find where ya hiding the cash/
would of thought he was a mule the way men be riding jack's ass/

I could put Jack-N-Da-Box, or jack Jack for his watch/
suburban punk, i kNEW Jack's CITY wasnt the old Movie on FOX/

what you a killa like OJ? OKAY lyrical tech out ill squeeze pop n peel
this fruit\
then in act 2 you would think i was a nazi how i kill da jews(juice)/

the real Jack the Ripper is a legend-your not even a faded veteren/
its evident he gets black mailed/maled like David letterman

-- Mon Apr 05, 2010 7:38 pm --

Uppin 4 Votes

Best Punch from Jack - "You can feast on these jabs, juss weak kats that's facin' change and problems
He Audio? Naw. Juss "Major Paynes on the track" like it was "Damon Waynes joggin"
4/5
Best personal from Jack - "I'm confused, seriously, it aint even bout a punch or fight now
If all that's left is pussies like this, yall might as well shut the site down" -- LMFAO (sad but true)
4/5

Best punch from MV - "I could put Jack-N-Da-Box, or jack Jack for his watch/
suburban punk, i kNEW Jack's CITY wasnt the old Movie on FOX/" - 3/5 That was pretty cool, a little forced tho

Best personal from MV - "ill take ya loot, jackpot when i find where ya hiding the cash/
would of thought he was a mule the way men be riding jack's ass/" 2.5 this one confused me.. the set up wasn't there and wasn't quite sure about the delivery but it was your most memorable personal.

as for the other cats like Flow and Word Play - Tie on the flow and Jack catches the word play along with the personals and punches.

Vote = Jack

0-1

Uppn

Uppin......

a cat sweep to jack

major ur flow was forced in spots but other than that u had forced nameplay and played nameplay...

but punches wise jack just outclassed you elevate and maybe you can get a lil closer to him next time...

thx uppin..

Both were good. Major nice with the wordplay

but i gotta give it to jack

i accept the vote. no need to prolong this you know? Good shit Jack. hope to get a rematch sometime.