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Look at them dudes they swear and wanna
live my dream as a rhyma but got nona my persona
U not my equal ta adopt my style like madonna
For the eye of the people they just da prequel
cuz i will drop ya tallest statement like osama
As an encore of terror Put fear into ur people
Cuz im hotta than lava and u rising like wata
into the heavens and im not even spittin sick flows
That aint cha belt or mike... im here for the repo
So cover ya peephole..I tidal wave ya crib into a sinkhole
If thats where u rest at ill make shure u rest black
Like slaves that were left at where they bled at
Da worth of a breath thats bought aint shit thats
worth the weight of the vessel that thought raps
Where to be controlled like corrctional facilities
This aint you this is more than words n similies
My metaphors are lethal dat inmates green mile
Live in denial and ill die you rolling a trips
Im a divider like blocks between blods n crips
A war zone....u just a kid on gaza strip
Im using this plunger for all of dat shit u spit
Dont show ya face digested i hate lookin at my shit
Just wipe you out and flush im rid of the stench

i kno i suck...just tryna get them skillz back lol

This piece
was alright. I liked the Osama metaphor. Had okay flow, the rhyme structure was a little hit and miss. I can see potential though, just keep at it.

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this really does got some potential....
I can see you growing into a dope MC before Summer's end
got some aight punches and a smooth flow tho'
came across dope....keep writing my dude!