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Posted: Fri Sep 22, 2006 11:41 am
by Buddha
aite i did dis trax wit my boi from canada
Posted: Fri Sep 22, 2006 5:01 pm
by complexity
Beats sick. Like some Eminem shit.
chorus sucks
All verses were straight. It seemed a little unorganized.
Maybe a little rushed. Lots of fillers.
All of you need to work on more complex schemes,
thoughts,wordplay. Things of that nature.
Overall I still liked this. And its got replay value.
Posted: Fri Sep 22, 2006 5:13 pm
by Buddha
Sweetttt!!!
Posted: Fri Sep 22, 2006 8:26 pm
by Subsist
The guy that did the first verse was amazing and the beat was really good he has skill, everything else sucked especially that chorus.
Posted: Fri Sep 22, 2006 10:00 pm
by precise
yea, nice track, definately a song you can keep listenin too, good vocal styles, i agree with plex about not really feelin the chorus, and yea, this beat is fuckin great
overall, its dope as hell
Posted: Sat Sep 23, 2006 3:13 pm
by Buddha
thx on feedback ya bum
Posted: Sat Sep 23, 2006 3:23 pm
by Ambiguous Realm
nice beat, good delivery....chorus is pretty crappy...pretty basic in the lyrical areas..overall it was pretty decent
Posted: Sat Sep 23, 2006 7:02 pm
by Buddha
aite kool kool thx for the feedback