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zombieness

Posted: Tue Apr 13, 2010 7:20 am
by Borat
I'm wakin up, shakin up, head inna daze.
Seperated body parts on the ground where I lay.
After 3 weeks of death. Imma mess,
Rip the lung off my chest, to stand to catch a breath.
Drop a handfull of flesh, scratch my head and access.
Alright. I'm war torn and battered, body soaking up maggots,
The pants around my waist, the only fabric I have left.
My stomache's buldging, skin burstin open.
My inside's are outside, can barely keep my mind focused.
My senses heightened, intentions on fightin,
I let the voice inside me start to drive me.
I've got infection in my blood I'm cold as ice is,
You ain't never seen me like this, I'm almost life-less.
I gotta walk with a bob in my step, search for flesh
Or anything left fresh enough to digest.

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Re: zombieness

Posted: Tue Apr 13, 2010 12:12 pm
by Borat
im totally down for a collab with zombies, I got some plot ideas I will hit you up in pm

Re: zombieness

Posted: Tue Apr 13, 2010 9:58 pm
by M-Vario
ZOMBIES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

good vision on this one. i want a piece of this zombie action.

Re: zombieness

Posted: Wed Apr 14, 2010 5:21 am
by QwarterZ
I had this idea before....and I think it came across the same way you did it
although I never up'd it considering....it'd be weird?

then again I guess we're not so different you n I

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Jwbxc4bA2zY

Re: zombieness

Posted: Wed Apr 14, 2010 8:12 pm
by Borat
^ haha word.

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Re: zombieness

Posted: Thu Apr 15, 2010 5:04 am
by complexity
This is very detailed, even one bad line, would have made this piece a lot less effective. But it was pretty much consistent through out, though I'm not a fan of the topic, I think that you did it at a high level.

Good to see you back in the scripts.

Re: zombieness

Posted: Thu Apr 15, 2010 2:06 pm
by Borat
Thanks plex. Preciate the feed everyone.

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