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Raise em to the sky, and pour a little beneath your feet
the sweetest deciet is love of self, mirrors shatter piece by piece
crumble goes my ashes, and I arise like the dreams I've seen
power strickens me, constrictin' me, now I can seize the free
like a dope fiend I see, errythin' rebuild, now I seem ill
I circle the skies with free will, but grasp pain, amongst e-vil
The Queen is Medusa, so we will, rock you until we discuss me-sles
a muscle, a deception, a decline in native tongues with meek skills
*ahem*the mind and music takes a different route*ahem*

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Now they say they won't listen to a fool whose dinky n complains
so my shoes is Pinky & The Brain, my thoughts is like Stimpy in a way
with the mind of Ren, I cosign my friends, choke their style in my defense
till I find my sense I continue with each line poppin' out like crime offense
I say my thoughts really won't move forward and I lose all range of ether
mad cuz I ain't bang-ing either unless its silly broads with Angry Beavers
won't let it change me either, my flow wet but slides smooth a poncho waterin'
plus I got so hot with poppin' pens, fans minds pop out like they Rocko's Modern
I went off the deep end, colossal dober-men, but straight pussy must be Catdog
must be hats off, must be half off, think it's Doug Funny till I dust these pants off
till I crush each hand on, my way UP, doin' it for the backflips I'm hardly round
fall back homey, Charlie Brown, till everything feels like we in the Army now
so many guns, Jim Carrey, Mask on.....and I'm gonnnnnnnne


yea I done fucked up cuz the beat stopped.....don't know what to call this............ohhhhhhh ok

thanx for feeding

nice lyrics, nuthing to criticize to that.. so i complete feel ya lyrics

Best Part Of Your Drop

Raise em to the sky, and pour a little beneath your feet
the sweetest deciet is love of self, mirrors shatter piece by piece
crumble goes my ashes, and I arise like the dreams I've seen
power strickens me, constrictin' me, now I can seize the free
like a dope fiend I see, errythin' rebuild, now I seem ill
I circle the skies with free will, but grasp pain, amongst e-vil

Every Thing Was Dope Until You Strayed Off After Evil.. Cartoon Punches Are Funny But It Made Your Whole Drop In The Beginning Pointless. I Woulda Called The Second Drop "Aftertoon" Or Something Witty. But In My Opinion The Beginning Had My Attention.

"The Queen is Medusa so we will rock you..." I thought that was mad clever. Props bro. The two drops did seem to have two completely different tones, and each were dope in their own right but I was really feelin' those cartoon punches, maybe just cuz I can relate haha. Either way, keep droppin man.

word thanx for peeping....

but the first verse was written to Paris, Tokyo

and the second was Go Go Gadget Flow

I say my thoughts really won't move forward and I lose all range of ether
mad cuz I ain't bang-ing either unless its silly broads with Angry Beavers

LMAO!! it was aiight only cuz i cant relate to cartoon punchlines... other than that it flowed very well.. nice drop