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i meant to leave feed on this earlier but i didnt get to finish because i WANTED to leave work.

there is alot of food for thought and quotables but the begining had me a bit disoriented. the last to paragraphs put me in focus. i like your use of metas in this piece and that last para was def full of knowledge on some Common shit.

I'll be on those nugs like Melo, surrounded by foes I can't persevere//
Walking around with dry elbows, trying to make a rose outta handful of dirt n' tears//<---------

ummm ruggz, good job, i m gotta help ya on chorus lol cos since i m good at it so lemme think a good for that

Yo ruggz its sick! I love the emotion that's put into this!! Makes me wanna write one kinda like it, but anyways good rap man I would like to hear this to a beat.

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This was purdy dope reminds me of some stuff I would get on
then again I've strayed far from that path
this is purdy dope tho, really got some nice bars
really keepin' the emotion alive in this! keep writing my dude!

This must be some of the best if read since i came to this site...for real... lots of imagery and emotion...topic is the shit cuz we can all relate..... For real im not technical so i cant speak on it but from an uneducated eyes stand poing this shit is really hot bro...Uppin

Walking around with dry elbows, trying to make a rose outta handful of dirt n' tears//

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a beautiful piece thanx for writin it

Lol, he's in jail right now trubblecleff

oh, well free ruggz free ruggz
still liked it