Hip Hop Forum

- Complexity
- Hazard

I'm asking,is this sixty minutes or just a half hour/
about to crack this glass and stab Matt Lauer/
Picture me, at a tea party, screaming out black power/
with black powder, putting these racists cats on blast like Jack Bauer/
sick of these fat cowards, all I got for them is jokes and laughs/
go joseph stacks with your hopeless ass/
I chose this path, acting like a satanist as an atheist/
haiti is an understatement, this is crazyness/
armed and dangerous, I will carry a rifle/
that will turn the set of american idol into american pyscho/
wearing the title, king of the writtens, and I ain't stopping it/
known as the man who took ekoms style, then did the opposite/
I'm positive, I'm half the reason these kids are dying younger/
write the city, tell them its going to be a violent summer/
I've got more drive and hunger than a fat guy inside a hummer/
a lot of big cats are putting up giant numbers, plex is the lion hunter/


Is this sixty Minutes or Another Shit Review?
They don't See d So the Suckers Skipping through
The last fucking thing i acknowledge Exists is you
Sad u Hating cause ejaculating with sandpapa Split ya Dick in 2
Killer, you Should dress in Bones that Weapon's Chrome
But the rounds you spit are Stepping stones..
Shading Corruption here To set The Tone,
Celebration's like Widow Donations it'd come from ya Death, Alone
Plus ya Chick ain't Faithfull in a room of Evan Clones..
One Minute a soldier the next Minute a Pig..
Flag got um telling Infinite Fibs..
Killing minors, Reminder put ya childs face on that Innocent Kid
Gangsta gangsta that's What you Potray Me as? Haiti Sad..
Crazy Spazz.. I Was good Misunderstood till ya Reflection Made Me Mad
Put The kid Killers down n pay Attention to ya Baby's Dad!
I Help the Community you Can't help ya Self..
Material dragging Down get the Elf a Belt ..
This a Santa Slay from His Tundra Down to Tampa Bay
I'm ahead of Nice, u Itching here i'll Dead The lice,
Dreding Life? i'll Snip the strings attached like he Fled ta Christ
Crying cause ya Chick won't Give you Head Tonight...
Though she gives every other Tip a Screw Like Sex Advice

I chose this path, acting like a satanist as an atheist/
haiti is an understatement, this is crazyness/

Gangsta gangsta that's What you Potray Me as? Haiti Sad..
Crazy Spazz.. I Was good Misunderstood till ya Reflection Made Me Mad

my 2 Fav bars

I thought it was a great job overall. Hazard there was a small bit of yours that could have been spiced up a bit. but nothing big.

For the most part haz i like this bar style writing from you i feel like ur other style has talent but u randomly flip the rhymescheme and mask the good parts...Actually u used that style but only 1 time

Material dragging Down get the Elf a Belt ..
This a Santa Slay from His Tundra Down to Tampa Bay
I'm ahead of Nice, u Itching here i'll Dead The lice,

^^3 back to back lines with dif rhymeschemes

cut that shit out tsk tsk but that was only there for the most part like i said u flowed well

Plex this shit was dope ....do u watch rescue me? with that joseph stacks punchline...

anywayz collab overall 7/10 keep em coming boyz

Joseph Stacks is the dude who drove his plane into the IRS building, that is what the reference alludes to. I haven't watched Rescue Me in years.

i feel whole thing i give this collab 8.5/10

Nice drop. I've noticed Plex drops a lot of bars that show intelligence that you don't see a lot so I respect that. It changes shit up from the constant gang bangin' street shit I get tired of readin'. The flow was pretty sick too. Nice multies.

Haz..i like this bar the most from you
Shading Corruption here To set The Tone,
Celebration's like Widow Donations it'd come from ya Death, Alone

Pretty nice drop with decent multies. Only thing I didn't like was the constant changing at the end. I can see switchin' it up once or so but that shit throws me off. Either way...nice drop fellas.

"Picture me, at a tea party, screaming out black power/
with black powder, putting these racists cats on blast like Jack Bauer/" - The set up had me rolling ( guess you're not a conservative).. love your up to date quotables.

"I Help the Community you Can't help ya Self..
Material dragging Down get the Elf a Belt .." I had to read this line twice, I was lmfao..

good collab i enjoyed readin it

lol gotta say, my favorite line was "i got more drive and hunger than a fat guy inside a hummer" lol i got a kick outa that, probably cause of the visual

Werd, dope collab on both parties. I liked the playful yet semi-serious approach. Sounds corny, I don't care. Plex's shit was on point, I agree with Precise, the Hummer line made me chuckle as well. Haz, I'm diggin the steppin stones bar, nice rhyme scheme. Overall, dope collab.

Plex had some hella funny lines. Both of your multis are pretty filthy, that seems to be your gig. Filthy flow in some parts, chopped in others. Also, the only constructive criticism I have besides that is that you have such intense multis it's almost like you overdo it. Like it's filthy and hella clever, but alright check this for example:

write the city, tell them its going to be a violent summer/
I've got more drive and hunger than a fat guy inside a hummer/
a lot of big cats are putting up giant numbers, plex is the lion hunter/

Felt like it was a bit of an overkill. We all know you're hella good at thinking of original shit on the spot, save one of your rhymes for later if you think of something rather than try to fit in in the right place. If it doesn't apply to you, take it or leave it. It's just what I notice.

7.5/10 collab

Good work

Who doesn't overdo multis though? I take your point, but with punchlines, I'm less sympathetic to your view. Now, if this were a serious topic, I'd probably agree completely, depending on circumstance.

Thanks for the feed, will return when I'm not overwhelmed by work.