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Whoever finish drop first..make no difference

G/l

Aiight...you gon' be my bitch for a lil bit...

Yo..

I’ve read ya weak raps, no wonder he begs for feedback when his rhymes is iffy
Yall see the way “Qwarter rolls”? I can do the same wit “Dimes & Pennies”

Tha heat can open layers that roast this hater from tha streets coz peeps owe me favors
No DJ, coz u wouldn’t see “Qwarters on the deck" if it was "Cheap Poker Players"

My speech as cold as glaziers, when the hook calls next, you gon look all wet
Illest Minds, I done shook yalls best, coz I'm "Flippin Quarters quicker" than a "Football Ref"

The man that defines the i's in winnin, so Ya damned by the time my rhymes is finished
Face up? Naw I'd rather "Shoot at Qwarter back" like 'cams behind the line of scrimmage'

My hands can unwind ya spine in minutes but fear should start before I free
Ya bars is borin’ me, and the only niggas that notice “Qwarters on the street” is the “Parkin’ Authority”

You aint got the heart to resort to beef, I’ll pull ya parts so you enter the thread broke
Down wit brothas? Qwarter don’t even “Noah Negro” like the “Bulls startin’ Center and Head Coach”

Damn...

I can see homie tryna network, and he been tryna channel vets
How To Rob? isn't recycling the same reason they cancelled Meth?

you tryna handle tech's? a dismantled Ref, till you can't handle sense
I can SEE homie tryna scare the competition writing with a Wu Masscare pen

Picking Up The Pieces, The Nanny, thought you had qwarter but didn't have Flan* Pressured
you a semi pro, I'ma automati expert, understand you is Fran Drescher

let's focus on your moniker, I guess you feeling that you prolly ill rookie
Homicide? it should be suicide the real Jack The Ripper only kills pussy

plus you a Simp son, tell me why dude stayin' so wack with plans?
he could bathe in toxic waste, his songs still won't be Radioactive...Man

so how you spit with skill and claim all them win's n no loss shit's is real?
I guess you won't change ur sig until it's pointed out, check please? get it? fit the bill.......

pause........my bad for being late...had some shit I needed to take care of



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Let's focus on your moniker, I guess you feeling that you prolly ill rookie
Homicide? it should be suicide the real Jack The Ripper only kills pussy
^^
fresh line

You aint got the heart to resort to beef, I’ll pull ya parts so you enter the thread broke
Down wit brothas? Qwarter don’t even “Noah Negro” like the “Bulls startin’ Center and Head Coach”
^^ YES!!!!!!

Qwarterzone-ya 4th and 6th bars were what your whole verse should have been. it seemed the the other bars were rushed and not well thought out. or they were just missing that UMPF. you had the ideas there for sure but they could have been worded better because they came off a bit weak at the punch.

Jack-by the 5 Bar the name flipping was getting redundant the last bar definitely made up for that. i think you could have varied your personals a bit. not your best but overall a solid verse.

Multies: Tie
Personals:Tie
Flow:Tie
Personals: too close to call
Punches:Jack

Vote: Jack Da Rippa

For me in the end it came down to the severity of the punches. Jacks just seemed to land a bit harder.

1-0 Uppin

JDRs Punches and name play and multis just had me going like damn Qwarter you did good but after reading jacks verse you shoulda did better real rap

vote JDR

Personals: Jack
Multis: Jack
Flow: Qwarter
Personals: Qwarter
Punches: Jack

Vote: Jack Da Rippa

Fuckin close... Jack, he damn near had you