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Re: A Late Night Drop...
Posted: Wed Apr 21, 2010 9:12 pm
by M-Vario
LoL this was delirous and abstract.
i wonder if you first few bars have anything to do with your religion question? i liked the suicidal rant followed my self reflection and finished off with a snap back to reality.
Re: A Late Night Drop...
Posted: Fri Apr 23, 2010 5:56 pm
by Munteskue_lol
it was a little random and unorthodox, but clever and tactful at the same time. good shit man.
Re: A Late Night Drop...
Posted: Sat Apr 24, 2010 6:56 am
by QwarterZ
Yes god, the bets off, just me and you, for the record, on the record//
Better yet turn off the record, pause a second, lets talks a second//
those lines remind me of some Royce shit
very nice tho', I see your experimentation with flows
I'm diggin' it, and as always coming with a shitload of lyrics
Rugged bout to be my favorite MC on here.....
besides myself.... = )
Re: A Late Night Drop...
Posted: Thu Jun 10, 2010 5:49 pm
by complexity
I thought this was real dope and clever. I don't have the energy to leave in depth feedback.
The on the record line, I thought was pure. And Royce's line was a completely different play on words. He was talking about physically offing a record instead of actually shutting it off.
"I'm feeling hungry, it's almost 4:20am, I see an empty plate so drop a feed// "
^could have been doper
Quality.
Re: A Late Night Drop...
Posted: Fri Jun 11, 2010 5:47 am
by FlipSide
Shits crazy... i read it twice and there were parts where i totally lost the flow... but in retrospect i dont think u write for that... Its more of an impact piece... well i liked this
That was something I could do and feel original, a real individual, it was simple too//
I got expelled 6 times in 5 years, yep, all the way back to when I was in middle school//
Dunno why?.... Just dam matter of factly put
All I did was watch movies and read, walk the streets while my imagination salivates//
Get beat up by mexicans, smoke by the river, maybe tag up a back alley way//
Wow lol...again .. like it aint shit...oh what u do today... then rugg says this ^^^ lol
Dude this is wayyyy Dopeness...
Re: A Late Night Drop...
Posted: Sun Jun 13, 2010 1:09 am
by JDR
That was something I could do and feel original, a real individual, it was simple too//
I got expelled 6 times in 5 years, yep, all the way back to when I was in middle school//
Love the multies and how it all fit in together
How's this for a punch, "your mom must be dirty cuz all she do is swallow seeds"//
Off the top, good huh?, but I'm out cuz it seems like everywhere I go halloween seems to follow me
Nice closer.
Feelin' this. Kind of twisted but nice!