Re: Mental Graffiti
Posted: Fri Apr 23, 2010 10:39 am
Actually Eros, you're quite a gifted writer. You're complex in a way that most of your joints are abstract thinking mixed with random inner thoughts. Maybe not so much hip hopish, but more poetic.
"So I’ll let him win for now/
And keep being a kid who can’t swim or roller skate/
Watch the wind spin the clouds/
With scraped knees/ taped jeans/ and eyes like cobra snakes/" -- way to end this piece.
"So I’ll let him win for now/
And keep being a kid who can’t swim or roller skate/
Watch the wind spin the clouds/
With scraped knees/ taped jeans/ and eyes like cobra snakes/" -- way to end this piece.