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Intangible mentals, unstoppable violence/
Picasso of rhymin, hot as tropical climates/
Philosophical minded, I bring much more to the table/
Warped and unstable, a mix of Chuck Norris and Plato/
Young forced from the cradle, labeled a war junkie/
Enslaved by the force, let's disable some more countries/
They've shaken the core of me, tainted by Hell's vision/
Ashamed that I felt sickened, im caged in this self prison/
I'm waitin but help isn't rushin to save me/
The government jumps to replace me, dubbin me crazy/
Just a number and space, a disposable soul/
But i broke from the mold, my hopes coated with gold/
I've grown to withhold, show restraint and reserve/
though I blatantly curse this great nation we serve/
My faith is reversed, this pride is a waste/
As we try to berate the world with our violent charades/

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crazy multies, flow is mmmmmmmmm

shits dope as fuck i liked it 8/10

sick flow and multies from what i seen but from an audio stand point i dunno how it would sound cuz it seems like a whole bunch of lil statements to me... other than that as written the shit is hot....

the multi's were off the hook on this one very dope
I was reading this when it was in the shoutbox!

very nice piece of work Ruckus! i was feeling it

Hmm. I don't know if I really have a favorite line, but the ones that were self aware were clearly the deepest.

Dude this was fuckin filthy. The flow was on and off which is the biggest thing I can point out. Like I'm reading it and I'm hella into the crazy ass multis and depicting your rhymes then all of a sudden I have to pause for a second to read it with rhythm.

When the hell did I set the bar so high? lol. Can't drop shit anymore without hearing "this is average for you, but if someone else dropped it, it'd be amazing."

^^lol

Hot... Just strait flames

LOL ... ur avrage Post is fire Ruck...
been waiting for a post from ya...

I guess now i got to post something.

keep that sick shit coming
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damn crazy skills man your filthy