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I'm new to this site so allow me to introduce myself//
just another lyricist to arrange on your trophy shelf//

I'm higher than a pothead flying Delta Airline//
Stopping time for emcees who already comsumed this flatline//

I'll demolish and seperate your rhymes like a cotton gin//
For I am a lyrical sorcerous a fairy tale by Han Andersen//

Not bad..i liked your first Line ur 2nd and 3rd was ok not bad thou keep it upp!

hmm. Needs to be a lot longer. The lines were terrible, but they weren't very good either. Keep it up!

showed some potential with the wordplay, just work on elevating your rhyme schemes

overall not a bad piece for a short introduction