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deliver the rhymes

Posted: Fri Apr 30, 2010 4:14 am
by deafshady
Simple written freestyle: I played on the wrong side of the streets as a kid/I grew up a screw up, check the shit that I did/I tried to keep the anger under control/I tried hard not to sin so God would one day take my soul/I've been a thief since I had baby teeth, now it's time to change my ways/The industry pays much more than crime, 'cause crime don't seem to pay/Before I give it all up and reconcile with my lyrics to this song/I got the right for one last fight, hater, bring it on

These rhymes I deliver and show no mercy, U couldnt get a pardon from me if you was part of the clergy, thats rite you heard me, roots in jersey, but rep in texas; Semicolon, yes we wreckless, its my checklist, the I am acknowledging, pondering, how to compose a monopoly, of hip hop prodiges, 1st round would be kweli quality, obviously my next choice, is a voice that provoke noise from boys to grown men, o-ffending children, I probably get Em, and nas...
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Re: deliver the rhymes

Posted: Fri Apr 30, 2010 4:47 am
by FlipSide
/I've been a thief since I had baby teeth
I like that line did not carry over to the next but i still like it
roots in jersey, but rep in texas; Semicolon, yes we wreckless
LMAO!!! i dunno why i find that shit funny

Getting better my dude but next time put that shit in bars