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deaf man is immortal

Posted: Fri Apr 30, 2010 4:55 am
by deafshady
imagine a place where a syllable takes up the role of being one of life's miracles.
if words could kill then you gotta just chiiiiiiiiiill, because murder's now lyrical.
the mute guy is harmless, but on the other hand, the deaf man is immortal, you can't harm him.
consonants attack like a flesh eating virus;
they force you to watch your death by eliminating your eyelids.
now, with your eyes exposed,
you can actually see the A's E's I's and O's
destroy U like booze and pills.
if words could kill ya

Re: deaf man is immortal

Posted: Sat May 01, 2010 6:52 am
by QwarterZ
it should be....deaf man is immoral

honestly when you write somethin' without a beat
it doesn't flow smoothly...and being that...you know what

just write with a beat bro...and don't oversaturate the open mic too much aight? keep writing

Re: deaf man is immortal

Posted: Sat May 01, 2010 9:54 am
by Mass Effex
qwarterzone wrote:it should be....deaf man is immoral

honestly when you write somethin' without a beat
it doesn't flow smoothly...and being that...you know what

just write with a beat bro...and don't oversaturate the open mic too much aight? keep writing
He's deaf dude...I think.


Nice drop.

Re: deaf man is immortal

Posted: Sat May 01, 2010 10:14 am
by FlipSide
mute....cuz u sign rap right? and u couldve made it a lil longer for the work of moving my index and clicking on it to be worth it ....
Some lil rhymes in there
the mute guy is harmless, but on the other hand, the deaf man is immortal, you can't harm him
That was a cool line dude

Re: deaf man is immortal

Posted: Mon May 03, 2010 2:49 am
by deafshady
yall right i m deaf i cant speak so open mic i could nt do it, i ll upload a new video of me with my sign rap so yall will love it tho