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Posted: Sat May 01, 2010 4:53 am
by Munteskue_lol
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Re: Somethin I wrote a while back
Posted: Sat May 01, 2010 6:49 am
by QwarterZ
It was purdy dope...had some decent lines in there
how long ago did you write this bruh?
you goin' to make it a track? I think it'd sound decent on a track
otherwise some lines just stuck out purdy good
and some kinda dragged....but nice work nonetheless
keep writing broski!
Re: Somethin I wrote a while back
Posted: Sat May 01, 2010 7:06 am
by Loon E Lou
yup yup i liked this. shit was ku dawg. my kinda flow. for me, errything flowed pretty well. have alotta good lines that jumped out. shit was pretty long so i felt i had to leave feed after readin the whole thing. good read
Re: Somethin I wrote a while back
Posted: Sat May 01, 2010 9:01 am
by FlipSide
good stucture... and topic about being in class brought me back to grammar school