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Morticians Would Blink At My Heart Of Gold/ My Heart Is Far From Cold, 300 Soldiers Marching Wit Archs N Bows, All Playing The Spartan Role/
Nigga I Ain't Hard I'm Dope 2 Many Snipas With Black Arms N Scopes.. I'll Face The Odds, Twiddle My "Schnoz" & Spit Sum Bars N Flows/
Shake & Nod, Break The Bond Then Blaze Sum Shots At The Fakes Who Blog Steady Aim, Red Laser Dot 2 Ya Frame Then Blot/
I Re-Create With God Who Made The Ark, Sketch The Page N Mark, Stretch The Day With Wits & Amazing Art/
These Serenades Can B Played At Parks Or Played Like A Deck Of Cards, Handle With Care Wordplay A Crystal Shard/
Every Bar Pushing Toward Its Margin, Sharp Aim Lyrics Dart At The Greatest Target, Desire N Wish 2 Influx & Remake The Market,
Segregate The Counterfeits Made 2 Artists, Set A Blaze The Stage & Then Raid "The Carpet"/ Its A Prophetic Cry, My Goals Sky Scrape As My Dreams Gyrate
& Touch The Sky Much Obliged 2 The Date & Time, As I Clutch N Devastate The Rhyme, Re-Animate The Phase N Shake The Blind/
Understand The Plays 2 Infiltrate N Elevate Ya Mind, These Liars Fabricate N Obscure A Ply/ I'm 2 Witty, Who's Biggie You Giddy Dude's Iffy,
Ever Since Dr. Dre Had 2 Spoon Fifty/ Now Crews Shitty, Tunes Kiddie, Moves 2 Oblivious 2 The Game..Go On Check The Tunes Riddied/
Haven't Heard 1 Good Groove Since My Boo Missy Or My Dude Diddy Just Sum T.V. Crews Hype Over New Cities/
Rapper's Delight Need 2 B Refueled Offa Sum New Civi's, Yeah N I'm A Take Shots.. Now Who's Wit Me?

Can't believe nobody feedin' this. Sick multies in this drop.

Morticians Would Blink At My Heart Of Gold/ My Heart Is Far From Cold, 300 Soldiers Marching Wit Archs N Bows, All Playing The Spartan Role/

You killed that opening. I'm diggin' that whole bar.

I Re-Create With God Who Made The Ark, Sketch The Page N Mark, Stretch The Day With Wits & Amazing Art/


pause.........................................ok God didn't make the ark

it sounds good but if you came across that and someone was like whoa..whoa
it could fuck up your whole steez
anyway this was a decent piece I'm diggin' it
although it did come across more different then what the title attempts to say...still it's a nice f'n piece
no doubt!

either way you got some nice drops my dude, you improve then you fall back down
but you keep moving at which point it seems really nice!
I'm diggin' the style you use tho'
just work on your structure...don't force errythin' to sound good
cuz if it's goin' good then you don't gotta fix it...correct? nice
ok keep doin' you dawg!