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Crayola Verse
Posted: Tue May 04, 2010 3:51 pm
by NoVeL
I Been Had This Out B 4 Major Variola Had His Color Script Up In Scriptures.. Kinda Had Me Laugh Cuz We Was Both Thinking The Same Thing But Lemme Know What Yall Think
Re: Crayola Verse
Posted: Wed May 05, 2010 1:51 am
by FlipSide
U got the flow...mos def.. but to me it sounds low...ur voice.. im listening on my lptop so i dunno if its the computer... But it seems tight.. U spit with ease so i see u been on for a while... I think imma have to wait to give better feed when i get home n plug my shit to the speakers... Cuz it sounds tight i just cant hear all of it...ok i listened again and ive determined that u gotta up ur vocals and it would be tight... For real i heard most the lyrics and for the first time hearing u i must say im impressed duke!
Re: Crayola Verse
Posted: Mon Jun 14, 2010 4:03 am
by MohammedT
Lyrics and flow are all on point. Like everyone else said either the mic was low or your delivery was maybe just a little too laid back. either way i really liked itman.
Re: Crayola Verse
Posted: Mon Jun 14, 2010 4:48 am
by K KiLLaH
if u live in ct lets get on a track!!!
Re: Crayola Verse
Posted: Mon Jun 14, 2010 3:35 pm
by Darth Vader
Yeah you definitely gotz flow, if you amp your shit up its gon sound hot, blood. Don't hold back when you spit, feel what you're saying and let the emotion come out..real talk, it'll help you. Good drop, keep bangin em out, elevate, Bless.
Re: Crayola Verse
Posted: Mon Jun 14, 2010 5:29 pm
by STUD_PHaMOUS
i liked this! this is somethin i would vibe out & listen too.. just polish yo flow and put a little more emotion into what you saying.. that beat is nice too!
Re: Crayola Verse
Posted: Tue Jun 15, 2010 4:03 am
by HKX
dope track man up the vocals a lil more actually re-do dis man cuz this is sick I wanna hear the emotion on it u got flow man jus do u on the mic again wit a lil more passion and it'll sound nice. I'd bump this in the whip on the way 2 work or even if I was taking a cruise somewhere. Beat was ill as well you sound very laid back on the track. Think if you went in and re-did it would be perfect imma rate dis a 9 just cuz of dat re-do it and I'll rate it a 10 homie. Keep dropping dawg u def got flow don't slack on it
Re: Crayola Verse
Posted: Wed Jun 16, 2010 11:27 am
by Loon E Lou
jus vocalz dawg. other than that.........HIP HOP. i loved this dawg. fareal. i can jus light a spliff and really trip on it. yea this remind me of some hip hop no doubt. diggin this dawg. really am.