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http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=unz8wTmVF4c

Let me ascend the highest properties, defy it's anamolies
allow me to arise as the eyes of poverty, a slight commodity
the phoenix who defied loss, defeat, suprised common thieves
stripped scriptures, toppled sovereign speech, pardon me
as Babel crumbles and crackles, I remain humbled in shackles
painting the skies with the finger tips that rumbled with assholes
how can I be subtle with past views, as I juggle the battles
I saw dem, crumbled they castles, as they huddled their camels
struggled with hassle, and muscled the last few, authorities....
are the porcelin seats, and mothers became abortionists...sweet
as the endorphin's deplete, then begins the swarm of the beasts
they start coursin' the streets, utterin' of hell sworn in their speech
lightning puts the corners in heat, as I re-adorn all living beings
performance complete.......................................... ..



I woulda wrote more but nahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

dam dunny u got some writing skillz...from what i seen everything u drop is hot

Let me ascend the highest properties, defy it's anamolies
allow me to arise as the eyes of poverty, a slight commodity

Shit was tight!

I saw dem, crumbled they castles, as they huddled their camels
struggled with hassle, and muscled the last few, authorities....
are the porcelin seats, and mothers became abortionists...sweet
as the endorphin's deplete, then begins the swarm of the beasts

Shit just fucks wit ya head a lil u dig!!

Nice drop dunn!

Let me ascend the highest properties, defy it's anamolies
allow me to arise as the eyes of poverty, a slight commodity
like the multis nice flow
the phoenix who defied loss, defeat, suprised common thieves
stripped scriptures, toppled sovereign speech, pardon me
this was alright weaker than the first
as Babel crumbles and crackles, I remain humbled in shackles
painting the skies with the finger tips that rumbled with assholes
nice lil bar here wasnt to great but it was a good filler
how can I be subtle with past views, as I juggle the battles
I saw dem, crumbled they castles, as they huddled their camels
i like this again tho just average
struggled with hassle, and muscled the last few, authorities....
are the porcelin seats, and mothers became abortionists...sweet
this was cool but wasnt really feelin it
as the endorphin's deplete, then begins the swarm of the beasts
they start coursin' the streets, utterin' of hell sworn in their speech
nice line here good shit
lightning puts the corners in heat, as I re-adorn all living beings
performance complete.......................................... ..
nice ending alround id say this was a very good piece nothing great and outstanding but good story behind it keep it up

Let me ascend the highest properties, defy it's anamolies
allow me to arise as the eyes of poverty, a slight commodity
the phoenix who defied loss, defeat, suprised common thieves
stripped scriptures, toppled sovereign speech, pardon me


I thought that opener was sick bro, and the rest of it flowed really well together. I've noticed you've always got some great content/topics and that's not a skill everyone has so good work man.