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Still going

Posted: Mon May 17, 2010 1:34 pm
by Haz
You'd Think They'd Know The Deal Like I Mailed The Sales
iLL Bitch Was iller then Half these Bitches These Males Is Frail
Like Hunting a Wolf From The Back Their Trails is Tales
These Slow Fucks Fast To Follow Till They Tail a Snail
Never Moving Like The Lawyers Bad They Fail ta Bail
Lyrical Hammer Like Polish Sniffa's Inhale The Nails
It's Spanking Time The Sharper 1's Ain't Shanking Mine
Keep Comparing M-C's, Don't Mind Me Like Frankenstein
Like a Gang Of Quiet Drinkers They Ain't Set The Bar
Don't Try N Test The Star You'll Get Left As Tar
No Take back Policy in Play When they Ref The Spar
Still The Best Of R, List of People Spitting Lethal
Twisting Diesel Circling The Sour 1's.. Sitting Wiesel's
Couldn't Last a Second With Haz The Weapon ..
See Me Beating what Birth'd My Seeds Like Dad's Reflection


Re: Still going

Posted: Thu May 20, 2010 12:02 pm
by complexity
I didn't see any stand out lines, besides maybe the frankenstein one. But overall it was an enjoyable piece, a quick read, with some nice punches. That's about all I can say.

Re: Still going

Posted: Fri May 21, 2010 8:49 am
by MOEstradamus
really nice piece it had some good punches and good flow multis where on point as always like this read keep it up bro
It's Spanking Time The Sharper 1's Ain't Shanking Mine
Keep Comparing M-C's, Don't Mind Me Like Frankenstein
my fav bar from it

Re: Still going

Posted: Fri May 21, 2010 9:09 am
by FlipSide
You'd Think They'd Know The Deal Like I Mailed The Sales
iLL Bitch Was iller then Half these Bitches These Males Is Frail
Like Hunting a Wolf From The Back Their Trails is Tales
These Slow Fucks Fast To Follow Till They Tail a Snail
Never Moving Like The Lawyers Bad They Fail ta Bail
Lyrical Hammer Like Polish Sniffa's Inhale The Nails
Other than everythong rhyming in one line at the end...But for somereason this really stands out...prolly cuz the punches were killer..in my opinion.. I never read ur shit before so that might be one thing... but keep droppin duke.. i thought the flow was nasty to this as well