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Bent For The Reason Of Breathing, Seeming
Like Theres No Treason With Demons, Fiendin
For the Sky's To start Beaming a Meaning,
Skeaming? Never, Rather Not The Chatters Stop'd
The Other Me's in a Coma Let it's Ladder Rot
^^^^^^^^that was nice

I felt the imagery in this, very skillfully done
and very well written
your styles dope when you interweave your words like that
keep writing bro!

damm i liked the flow on this built up for me, cus well we all got different ways of reading it, had nice flow to it and some nice metas

I'm Passed Waiting i'll Throw ya Orda In ya Face Till Glass Breaking
Ask Satan The Heats Under Ground Fuck What The Mass Stating
When it Comes To Gifted Every Christmas i Intercept The Twelve
Still RETARDS Talk About My Shit Like It'll Effect Themselves

this was fire imo nice drop haz keep this shit comin

whole shit was hott until the ast line...why the fuck did u do that n throw off the rhyme scheme?

Yea bro, I was feelin' this whole thing until the last line. I mean I get the picture/punch you were trying to create with it, but it just needs to be woven in better. Overall I liked it though, nice drop