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*late night*
I awake

Mother I'm stressin', I'm dreamin' of demons and indegestion
I strung out her intestines, I stretched em just to digest em
I'm catchin' semen and droppin' it on your gleamin' extensions
I'ma blessin' to the evils, the people say I'm just a cause of...
depression? are you sad mommy? my hands are now clawed up
I tossed up, I'm sowwy, I'm tryna find myself a dress like mom does
so I could run outside and call buds, tell em to bring the con-dom's
so I can fuck em, and leave that screwdriver in their ear drums
I can hear someone yellin' at mom, mom are you in trouble?
I would love to grab them and stab them, I hate to bust your bubble
but I think I'm seein' double, I'm sorry I let the draft in let us huddle
or maybe we should cuddle? do you need a bath? I can heat it up
I can see me just, rub your back and wash you up let me just...
ok there's your towel, before you utter another vowel I'm out the cloud
I know your disembowel'd, but pull yourself together before you get out
I hear a knock, knock, I'm sorry but I need to make that barkin' stop
I grab a razor blade, and graze your face, good night mom I got...I got
to make this barkin' stop, I gotta grab that razor blade before it's taken away
*leaves the bedroom*

lol yea i do see the eminem influence in this piece lol when i was reading some of it i was picturen eminem saying it lol. it was decent flow was there it was a fun read but nothing that will make me look back and say that was one to remember

Straight crazy kid... the entertainment level of this joint is up there... its most def off the wall and u got mad flow son...i cant judge as for text but i think u one of the ill ones on illest... allways enjoy reading a good drop...

I know your disembowel'd, but pull yourself together before you get out

favorite line prolly the only one i would remember from it cuz of the punch

the whole piece was entertaining the rhymes were nice and the flow was great the imagery was impeccable.but it sounds familiar. i liked it enough i would want the audio